Reviews For One Blue Line
Reviewer: emilyyxo1
Date: 08/24/07 23:23
Chapter: One Blue Line

good story!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/16/07 12:57
Chapter: One Blue Line

Loved every bit of it. I knew there would be some twist to it.....Definitely -- This is totally Kudos-worthy! Good job!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/16/07 12:56
Chapter: One Blue Line

Loved every bit of it. I knew there would be some twist to it.....Definitely -- This is totally Kudos-worthy! Good job!

Reviewer: jinx_pickle_jinx
Date: 08/07/07 22:23
Chapter: One Blue Line

haha i love fics like this

Reviewer: Ginnyandtheweasleys
Date: 07/30/07 7:49
Chapter: One Blue Line

funny.

Reviewer: kassinikki41594
Date: 07/29/07 17:01
Chapter: One Blue Line

OMG!!! This was so funny. I haven't heard a story like this in awhile. It was really good

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 07/29/07 9:20
Chapter: One Blue Line

Phew! You had me holding my breath the whole time, it was so relieving at the end! Great story!

-harry_victoria

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 07/28/07 0:09
Chapter: One Blue Line

HA! That last line was...=p =)

Well, this story had an interesting plot twist. It was odd/interesting how it all wove together...~

H_o_I_

Reviewer: Rawena
Date: 07/25/07 21:12
Chapter: One Blue Line

cute...i liked it!

Reviewer: Rawena
Date: 07/25/07 21:11
Chapter: One Blue Line

cute...i liked it!

Reviewer: Rawena
Date: 07/25/07 21:11
Chapter: One Blue Line

cute...i liked it!

Reviewer: Shadowgirl
Date: 07/16/07 4:41
Chapter: One Blue Line

Hilarious. Fabulous. Cunning. Great! Please write more.

Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/11/07 23:38
Chapter: One Blue Line

i really liked this bit particularly :

“Yeah Ron, you should know that Ginny believes in waiting for sex ‘till after marriage,” Fred said, resting his arms on the top of his left knee, his other leg stretched out in front of him.

Ginny and Harry looked awkwardly between each other, both faces turning crimson. “Oh yes, of course,” Ginny said, thanking Merlin that her brothers were idiots.

But the whole fic rocked! :D

Reviewer: Alas123623
Date: 06/24/07 8:39
Chapter: One Blue Line

Nice fic i liked the ending. This your second excelent fic that i've read

Reviewer: Au_n_Snitch
Date: 06/03/07 1:38
Chapter: One Blue Line

Good one.... For a moment I thought it might actually be Hermione's positive test... Oh, well.

Reviewer: Snapes_secret
Date: 05/24/07 15:17
Chapter: One Blue Line

This was a very well thought out and executed story. The family dynamics between the Weasley men and their protective instincts towards Ginny was perfect. Most brothers have no problem engaging in certain activities with their girlfriends; however, the idea that someone might do the same with their sister is completely beyond comprehension or acceptance.

In particular I enjoyed the line from Fred: “Maybe Ginny just likes to piss on Muggle things!”. However, I would point out that as it was a Muggle device, how would Fred know it requires urine?

Poor Harry, caught in the middle, has gotten his first taste of what it means to be with Ginny. Certainly had her brothers caught on at the end, he would be sporting a matching black eye.

The ending is quite humorous. The possibility that Molly would have another child is not out of the question. It would seem wizards and witches have longer lives than their Muggle counterparts. I think it would have been even more delightful if the pregnancy test had not been Molly’s, though, but Hermione’s. I could see Hermione, with her Muggle upbringing, being familiar with a Muggle test like the one in question. If nothing else, it would certainly have turned the tables on Ron.

All in all, you did a fine job at handling the characters in an unusual and funny situation.

Snape’s Talon / Snapes_secret

Reviewer: hansangel93
Date: 05/01/07 18:54
Chapter: One Blue Line

that was so funny and cute at the same time! im adding it to my favs!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 04/28/07 19:51
Chapter: One Blue Line

The Weasley boys are just so clueless. That would have been pretty funny if Mrs. Weasley was pregnant, though. All in all a very funny fic.

Reviewer: Hermioneee
Date: 04/19/07 17:50
Chapter: One Blue Line

HAHAHAHAHA.
priceless :)

Reviewer: Hermioneee
Date: 04/19/07 17:50
Chapter: One Blue Line

HAHAHAHAHA.
priceless :)

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