Loved every bit of it. I knew there would be some twist to it.....Definitely -- This is totally Kudos-worthy! Good job!
Loved every bit of it. I knew there would be some twist to it.....Definitely -- This is totally Kudos-worthy! Good job!
OMG!!! This was so funny. I haven't heard a story like this in awhile. It was really good
Phew! You had me holding my breath the whole time, it was so relieving at the end! Great story!
-harry_victoria
HA! That last line was...=p =)
Well, this story had an interesting plot twist. It was odd/interesting how it all wove together...~
H_o_I_
Hilarious. Fabulous. Cunning. Great! Please write more.
i really liked this bit particularly :
“Yeah Ron, you should know that Ginny believes in waiting for sex ‘till after marriage,” Fred said, resting his arms on the top of his left knee, his other leg stretched out in front of him.
Ginny and Harry looked awkwardly between each other, both faces turning crimson. “Oh yes, of course,” Ginny said, thanking Merlin that her brothers were idiots.
But the whole fic rocked! :D
Nice fic i liked the ending. This your second excelent fic that i've read
Good one.... For a moment I thought it might actually be Hermione's positive test... Oh, well.
This was a very well thought out and executed story. The family dynamics between the Weasley men and their protective instincts towards Ginny was perfect. Most brothers have no problem engaging in certain activities with their girlfriends; however, the idea that someone might do the same with their sister is completely beyond comprehension or acceptance.
In particular I enjoyed the line from Fred: “Maybe Ginny just likes to piss on Muggle things!”. However, I would point out that as it was a Muggle device, how would Fred know it requires urine?
Poor Harry, caught in the middle, has gotten his first taste of what it means to be with Ginny. Certainly had her brothers caught on at the end, he would be sporting a matching black eye.
The ending is quite humorous. The possibility that Molly would have another child is not out of the question. It would seem wizards and witches have longer lives than their Muggle counterparts. I think it would have been even more delightful if the pregnancy test had not been Molly’s, though, but Hermione’s. I could see Hermione, with her Muggle upbringing, being familiar with a Muggle test like the one in question. If nothing else, it would certainly have turned the tables on Ron.
All in all, you did a fine job at handling the characters in an unusual and funny situation.
Snape’s Talon / Snapes_secret
that was so funny and cute at the same time! im adding it to my favs!!!!!!!!
The Weasley boys are just so clueless. That would have been pretty funny if Mrs. Weasley was pregnant, though. All in all a very funny fic.
