Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/12/06 17:22
Chapter: Sirius

Not a bad first poem. It didn't flow just right, but it wasn't too bad. 7/10

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny_rox
Date: 10/01/05 10:03
Chapter: Sirius

Awsome! I thought it was realy good! And sssoooooooo sad. I wan't him to LLIIVVEE! oh well, good poem any way 10/10

Reviewer: Lycanthropist
Date: 09/15/05 20:10
Chapter: Sirius

I was perusing the site and stumbled into the poetry section and noticed you had no reviews. So I read your poem and came to offer praise and constructive criticism. Anyway, I first want to say I'm no poetry expert, so take anything constructive I have to say with a grain of salt. The second thing I wish to speak is that this wasn't half bad. I liked it. It had a simplistic style, okay diction, and good rhythm. There were a couple lines I was skeptical about and wondered if they belonged in the poem. A smile on his face was not out of place kind of threw me for a loop. I didn't think these lines fitted very well with the overall theme and were only placed there for filler. Othere than that, I really have nothing else to say on the matter.

Anyway, good poem. I'm glad I stumbled across it.

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