Reviewer: feydude
Date: 08/07/09 23:38
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

woah, freaky, but now i'm hooked! anxious for an update =o

Reviewer: Tina_hglover
Date: 12/27/07 11:27
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

OOOOMMMGGG that was scary plzzzzz keep writin!!

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 07/31/07 23:25
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

ARE you EVER going to finish this! I really want to read the REST:((

Author's Response: yes, i'm going to finish it. it's just that my mod duties take up so much of my time that i haven't had the chance to work on it. i'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 07/17/07 11:43
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

OMG YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY :(( PLEASE It would be awesome!

Reviewer: the badger
Date: 05/28/07 13:17
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

omg please add more chapters....this is brill and it wud be a shame if you didnt finish it.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/04/07 17:37
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

I loved this! Ron's reaction to Harry's news at the beginning was so in character, and Harry was very calm, cool, and collected to both Ron and Hermione, which is how he is when he has made up his mind. I thought that Harry just admitting to his fears of his death was a little OoC, but everybody cracks a little under stress. My next comment is about the part when Ginny is about to get on the train. I think that maybe this part is a little odd, because the Trio wouldn’t pass up saying goodbye to Ginny. Not if Hermione and Ron were able to talk any sense into Harry at all, anyway. In the next paragraph, you say ‘the erstwhile professor felt that he’d be much safer in his own home and left for parts unknown” this is a little confusing to me, because if he is safer in his home why did he leave to other places? You might want to revise this sentence. Up to you, though. It all is – these are simply suggestions. There’s only a few more. I hope these don’t make you think it’s bad – I’m trying to help. Okay. On with the revisons. In the same paragraph, you say miss a lot. Maybe look in a thesaurus, see what else can be used there. It’s a bit repetitive. Wow. The dream. (I’m typing this as I read, so you know my reactions) I think if Ginny’s heart grows any bigger she’s gonna blow. Oh no! Harry switched! What have you done!! Sorry – it’s so real! “Acutally, Riddle has…” Maybe Lord Voldemort here. Only Dumbledore called him Tom, or Riddle, so it kind of reminds the reader of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named’s enemys. Other than that, almost everything is perfect. But this one line “I laughed later at the conversation” is a bit out of place, it disturbs the flow. You might want to try “That was so comical, I almost couldn’t stand it!” When Voldy kills everybody, Ginny doesn’t scream, morn, or react to our knowledge. I think this is a little odd. And Harry hitting his master – this is so, OoC. Voldy wouldn’t let ANYBODY treat him that way. From the DE meetings we’ve seen, he is cruel to everybody. And then! OMG! Did Harry have the same dream? That would be awesome! Or did Harry realize something about the Horocruxes? That would be awesomer! Okay, well I hope you find some of this rambling useful. I’ll wait for you to update – then do it again! Tata for now. ~Abby

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/04/07 16:40
Chapter: Chapter One - Funerals and Weddings

Oh no! A cliffie! NO NO NO! I hate cliffies! *Pouts* At least there is a next chapter

It was really good and explanded a lot of things. Check out my review in the last chapter of Ginny's Task and you'll see what I mean. The crossed fingers part was great. I'm gonna go on now, but this was wonderful!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/04/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapter One - Funerals and Weddings

Oh no! A cliffie! NO NO NO! I hate cliffies! *Pouts* At least there is a next chapter

It was really good and explanded a lot of things. Check out my review in the last chapter of Ginny's Task and you'll see what I mean. The crossed fingers part was great. I'm gonna go on now, but this was wonderful!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/29/06 0:40
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

That dream CANNOT come true! Ever! Any of it!
I will seriously hate you if it does!! Beware!
On a different note, I am, again, slightly lost. Please update so I can figure it all out!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/29/06 0:27
Chapter: Chapter One - Funerals and Weddings

That was a little strange. The prequel didn't seem to fit exactly with HBP, really at all, and yet this takes place in that canon. I'm a bit confused.
However, I still do enjoy the plot. She is trouble!!

Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 10/04/06 15:04
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

ooohh. that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a chapter!

Reviewer: HPandPOTC
Date: 09/16/06 23:24
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

Oh my gosh! That was soooooo awesome, please let there be more soon. I am begging you because I am officially hooked on your story!!!! Thank you for being a good writer! LOL! But seriously that was really good. MORE!

Reviewer: HPandPOTC
Date: 09/16/06 23:22
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

Oh my gosh! That was soooooo awesome, please let there be more soon. I am begging you because I am officially hooked on your story!!!! Thank you for being a good writer! LOL! But seriously that was really good. MORE!

Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 09/03/06 20:29
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

AHHHHH!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 09/02/06 19:30
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

awwww poor giny nightmears stink

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 09/02/06 19:16
Chapter: Chapter One - Funerals and Weddings

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Reviewer: Ouch
Date: 07/30/06 15:20
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

Oh...ouch....*cringes*

You are merciless, you know that? That is one heck of a big cliffy, and I'm about to fall off! Please update, lickity-split!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 07/09/06 23:45
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

Aww... I hope you haven't abandoned this story! I love it. It's so well written and sweet. Ginny's Task was great as well and I'm totally interested in where you end up taking this story. Hope you update again soon!

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 06/23/06 13:23
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

ARGH. I love the story. Wonderful plot and very in character. The dream was a little creepy. Oh well. UPIDATE SOON

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/12/06 17:34
Chapter: Chapter Two – Schemes and Dreams

What a horrible dream Ginny had...Is Harry going to her? Please update-I can't wait to read more!

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