Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/04/12 4:03
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

Wow! What a great idea! I had fun reading it, although I am still a Severus/Lily fan. :) great job!

Reviewer: acciomagic
Date: 06/22/08 19:33
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

This was really good!

Reviewer: annaraine
Date: 01/09/08 11:04
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

Brilliant story. And, okay, I may be a little dense, (to be honest, I am rather doped up on cold medicine,) but I just re-read the exchange between Dumbledore and Malfoy at the end of HBP and couldn't find what you were referencing. Help! Or I may not be able to sleep! (Okay...the NyQuil will probably make me sleep, but still...)

Reviewer: Dragongrl
Date: 03/15/07 7:15
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

it really does give you something to think about. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 06/20/06 0:30
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

This was really great. I never thought of Severus having a relationship with Emmeline. That was really enjoyable to read. Good job!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 05/26/06 14:49
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

Wow! This definitely has some twists. Very nice.

Reviewer: Lady Whitehart
Date: 11/11/05 22:43
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

Fancy meeting you here! I really love this story. The way you keep us guessing about Snape to the very end is wonderful. I hope that he took way more credit for Emmaline's death than he deserved. Definately do a follow up to this story. Cheers!

Reviewer: Fawkes309
Date: 08/20/05 20:57
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

That was great. I thought it was a little farfetched when I first started reading, but as I read on it really came all together! Good job!

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/19/05 20:24
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

I was so upset, I almost stopped reading in the middle! Thank goodness I didn't! Concerning Snape's status at the end: This was definitely a role I never imagined him playing--but, as DD thinks at the end, an excellent reason for the seeming treachery we see in HBP.

Reviewer: Jabberwocky
Date: 08/14/05 11:35
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

This story is simply beautiful. It really shows the side of Severus Snape that J.K. Rowling tries to keep hidden from us; the Severus Snape that Dumbledore trusted and had faith in. And you really surprised me. I must have glazed over her reference while reading and I didn't really take it into consideration later. It's a great story, and you're a great author. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jabberwocky! In another story, I almost shipped Snape with Emmeline Vance, but chose Hestia Jones at the last moment. Then I kicked myself when I read HBP because I really could've went on with it. :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: unseen
Date: 08/13/05 4:01
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

I am amazed at the greatness of this story. And I hate you for writeing it. I for one was ready to write Snape off as a freaking jerk at the end of that book, for reasons I wish not to reveal (in case some one hasn't read the book yet.. you never know). That and I also don't like Snape. Well I just don't care to know much about him. I don't often read fics about him. But that doesn't mean I can't sing your praise. This was one hell of a fic. I don't know if any more is planned, but if not it was still amazingly awesome. And interesting thought on why Emmeline Vance Died.. or is thought to be dead.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, unseen. So you love me and you hate me; that seems to be the story of my life. :-) I am so happy you enjoyed this, even if you are not a Snape fan. I still think there's more to him than we've seen and I hope book 7 proves me right. Thanks again!

Reviewer: darrena
Date: 08/07/05 14:26
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

This is perfect. (considering that perfection doesn't exist) Anyway, it's brilliant. Really, I haven't read (yet) another story that fits so well. It's like the piece that it was missing. Keep it like this. You rock.

Author's Response: Of course perfection exists, darrena! My ex's ex-wife was the most perfect creature ever. And I heard about it all the time. :-) I am so glad you liked this! Thank you!

Reviewer: Little Loony
Date: 08/04/05 6:30
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

i can't believe how well that fits into cannon. i really really enjoyed it. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you, Little Loony! I'm glad to hear that!

Reviewer: pathetic_pettigrew
Date: 08/03/05 14:08
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

This is simply brilliant. As other reviewers have already mentioned, it's brilliantly in character, and fits remarkably well into the books. 10! (And I am an incredibly stingy rater).

Author's Response: Thank you, pathetic_pettigrew! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! This was my first attempt at Post-HBP and I'm glad it came off well!

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 08/03/05 12:30
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

One word can some this fic up: Wow. I just love it and it also seems so ... right. It is what I could actualy imagine to happen in the boks and I am glad that someone has taken the time to write of Emmeline Vance. There was nothing in this fic that was OOC which I am happy about. I've lost count of how many times I've stopped reading a fic because it was even slightly OOC.

I don't think I spotted anything wrong with this fic, so I don't think there is any way in which I can criticise. So ... Well done! An excellent fic and I will now go and search fpr more of your fics if you have any!

~Ermine the One~

Author's Response: Thank you so much, ermine the one! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Chapter 2 of HBP is definitely my favorite because you get to see another side of Snape. I hope you like the other stories as well.

Reviewer: Rose
Date: 08/02/05 7:25
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

I love this fan fiction, when you had her be killed and snape ws smiling I was like "GIT!"...or words to that affect... and then when i read the next bit I sighed a huge sigh of relief. I don't think Snape is really evil either. I think you did well. Snape romances are hard as whatever you do it will be OOC charecter but I think you really pulled it off and he sayed very much in charecter. well done I can't wait to read more of your work, this was a really interesting and original take on the murder of emmiline Vance (yes I know I more than likely spelt that wrong!) Keep up the great work! Rose. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Rose! I am so happy you liked this! I really love Snape and I think JK Rowling put in a lot of effort to make him look guilty. In fact, I think she put so much effort into making him look guilty, that he can't possibly be guilty. :-) I am so happy you like this!

Reviewer: Lycanthropist
Date: 08/01/05 23:44
Chapter: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

That was a unique twist on the nondescript and unacknowledged events of the Half Blood Prince. I've heard of your greatness when it came to writing Severus, but that was breath-takingly amazing. Perfectly in-character.

The plot was wonderfully developed. You really had me going with Emmeline's death; I thought for sure that she was dead. Though she remains alive with Daniel in tow now, we know a happy ending is not guaranteed for her and Severus. Also, she [Emmeline] was beautifully characterised in this.

Anyway, I have no criticism. There was a typo or two, but that's trivial and no one's perfect. I would really love to see a follow up to this. Maybe how Emmeline felt about what happened at the end of HBP? Well, whether there'll be a follow up or not, this was a great read. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lycanthropist! I had nearly paired Severus with Emmeline Vance in the past, so to hear him brag about being instrumental in her death... well, I figured there had to be another reason.

I really wanted to try to keep Snape ambiguous until the end, because I'm reasonably convinced that is what JK Rowling is doing.

I've had several people suggested follow-up, and I would love to do one, but the inspiration is not there right now. Perhaps one day. I am so happy you enjoyed this!


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