Loved it! That was fantastic! I haven't laughed so much in a good while. You worked wonders with Fred and George's present. Well done! I personally thought that Ginny's present was sweet, Remus's too. Does the ring have any magical properties? Who were Fred and George taking 'personal' pictures of? Great work! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Couldn't have done Fred and George's present without inspiration from their personal choreographer! I can see you doing the cauldron right now too! The ring will be back in later chapters, lets just say that for now. Fred and George were taking pictures of . . . Well they had red hair. More antics to come in the next chapter!
What? Cheesy? Absolutely not! Adorable! I love this whole chapter! Everything from the dancing (I can do the macerena with the best of them) to the scrapbook (another passion of mine) Sometimes I think you and I dance to the same drummer (maybe Mrs. G!) Anyway darling, you did a superb job on this chapter, I know how hard you worked on picking the right presents, and I think you hit the nail on the head for all of them. Including the key (SO ADORABLE!)
Author's Response: *does celebratory dance* Yay! Amanda liked my chapter! I wanted to do something unique with the gifts, and scrapbooks show alot of thought. Now I'm off to learn some new dance moves!
Curses, beaten again to be the first reviewer. It was good. I like it the gift from Remus was good.
Author's Response: Congrats on being the first to comment on Remus's gift! It will be back in a later chapter!
Yet another great chapter! Ginny's presant was a bit cheesy, but there's nothing wrong cheesy! 10/10
Author's Response: Not cheesy, sweet. And something a 16yr old girl could afford to give! Thanks!
that. was so. funny! i was laughing so hard my brother was yelling at me! i sent my friend to read it too! i loved fred and george! you got them just right! keep it up!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and recomendation. I love Forge and Gred.
Yay! I want my birthday to be as good as Harry's. Great chapter - can't wait for another!!! Thanks!
Author's Response: The next chapter is the actual party, just wait until the gifts are opened! Thanks for the review!
Omg! The Fred and George thing was so hilarious! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: As a card carrying member of the Forge and Gred fanclub, I love hearing people compliment me on their antics. You should check out my other story, Banana Twins, which is in the humor section, and Fred and George create all sorts of mischief.
WOW!! i like the start! well, like what i was telling Sorn and mrsgeorgeweasely, i will look forward to this story!! hope you update everyday! 10/10 for you! keep it up!
Author's Response: Well, it looks like I am going to have to finish writing chapter five! Thanks for the review!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!! That is all.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Fred and George ROCK! I love the chapter I almost fell out of my chair laughing so hard! Your writing is great I am really looking forward to reading more! 10/10
Author's Response: Let's just say Fred and George's antics were inspired by real life. *grumbles about siblings* Harry's birthday party is up next!
bloody brliant it made me lauf at the end10/10 ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! Who knows what the twins will do next time they catch Harry snogging their sister!
That was brilliant! You captured all the characters well and Harry and Ron didn't seem all that out of character. Your work with Fred and George was magnificent, very, very funny. I had me cackling in a funny deep, sniffy sort of way (i have a cold just now) and i had tears in my eyes. Good work, i can't wait to see the presents chapter! *10*
Author's Response: I had to rework Harry and Ron for this chapter twice for the mods, but I'm glad they finally accepted it. Fred and George are going to "kick up their heels" in the next chapter ;)
I just love this chapter! I've been waiting forever for it to be validated! You've done an excellent job in refining your writing, the descriptions are magnificent! And Fred and George catching everyone snogging is just so them. Congrats and I can't wait to see what you've cooked up for chapter 5, did you get your present situation all figured out?
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, I couldn't have done it without my beta! Fred and George are my favorites, I've got something special planned for them to give Harry. I did get all the birthday presents sorted out, I just have to finish writing the chapter.
Um, I thought I left a review yesturday, but whatever it is an excellent story, and I hope you update the next chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next chapter will be submitted as soon as the queue reopens on the 24th, please be patient until then. Or you can check out my other story, Banana Twins in the humor catergory.
Terribly good, old chap! *wink* Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Thanks! The birthday present will be in chapter five, I know Ginny will be very excited, because she loves to do you know what, and can't wait to do it with Harry. *winks* and for the three or so people who know the birthday presents besides me, I still have a surprise in store!
Very good, Petunia explained herself very well, and Fred and George's new trick is great. Well done!
Author's Response: *wakes up* did someone just leave me a review? Fred and George are very creative. I think I will go dance with them. ;)
Excellent start! I really like it and i'm going to go right ahead and read the rest of the chapters.
Author's Response: yay it's mrs gw! glad you could stop by, and that you like the story
Love it, Love it, Love it!! Keep writing!! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! I just had a major breakthrough on chapter 5, so as soon as chapter 4 is up, I'll submit chapter 5 (oh yeah AND after they reopen the queue)
In a review of my story you said: "You've got me hooked. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Great start! 10/10!" Well you said all I want to say about your story, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's nice to see authors that I like read my stories. I'm stuck on Harry's birthday presents though. Grrrr. Plenty of ideas for their trip to Diagon Alley, but first I need to finish chapter 5.
Really enjoying how light-hearted this is so far, have read a few rather heavy fanfics lately! Keep up the good work, really looking forward to how this pans out :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm not planning on doing any epic battle scenes, maybe just showing Harry preparing for battle. I think Harry needs to have some fun in his life.