Sorry, i just get nervous when something happens, and I start quoting certin authors. (Charles Dickons, xmas carol)
*Sees mental image of Hermione hanging from a noose* Please, Spirit, tell me this isn't true. I promise i'll change my ways, just don't kill Hermione
Hermione's gonna be hanged? *Feels faint, and sick to her stomach* I"ll give u a 10 only if u SAVE HERMIONE!!!!!!!!!! WHAT WILL HARRY AND RON DO WITHOUT HER???? *Sobs, screams and wails*
Author's Response: Oh, boy! I'll have to save Hermione then, won't I! :D
Oh my God! That was a great chapter but... PLEASE SAVE HERMIONE! SHE DOESN'T DESERVE TO DIE!!!!
AWESOME! There's just no other word for it. You write so well!! ;)
Hey, it's not as long as the last chapter, but it's still excellent! 10/10 of course!
Wow! That was extremely long, extremely well researched, and extremely well written. Good job!
Great start! I can't wait for your updates!
another great chapter. I can't believe hermione is accused scary! I like your story very much it is a nice change of pace...
I think that the trial was very well written and accurate. I had this nagging horror that Harry's anger might get to the point that he'd blow up like he did with his aunt in POA. Of course, thankfully that didn't happen because otherwise he would also be accused along with Hermione. I'm very scared for Hermione and hope that they can get out of this.
Author's Response: I hope the can get out of this too... *translation* I'm not saying anything.
Yay! I was waiting for this next chapter... I think the trial was written well; I couldn't really expect much better considering records of the real ones are, as you said, limited. Also, I'd like to say something about what (I think) you have said before about a previous chapter about the dialogue.. Right now, in school, I'm reading The Crucible, which is also about the Salem Witch Trials, and the dialogue is not that different from what it is today. At least, nothing that would make your story look bad. So if The Crucible was written with the same type of dialogue in the 1600's (which is probably the case) then you're not too far off. Anyway, enough of my rambling (: I gave you a 10.
Cliffe?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE?????????????
Author's Response: The next chapter has been in the queue for a while now. I have no clue why it's not up... Hmmm... :D
Awesome chappie!! Samatha really thinks the Trio did it? How will she prove it? *Rubs hands in glee* Hurry up and update SSSSOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!
now, That is the true meaning of evil cliffie! You stopped at the right point to keep everyone on tenderhooks! 10/10 Wandwood
Oh, wow. Exciting! Loved this chapter. You're an excellent writer. But, oh, the cliffhanger... you're killing me...
Author's Response: Don't die yet! There is a whole lot more to come! :D
Really good chapter. I'm excited to see what Samantha does with them and also what happens with her daughter. This story has gotten me really interested in the Salem Witchcraft Trials, to bad I can't learn about something like this in school! lol
Author's Response: Strangely they don't teach the interesting history at school! And then they ask why we hate history... typical!
I can tell that you've put a lot of effort in writing and researching this. It's a very wonderful and accurate story. Well, it wasn't long before the Trio would be suspected of witchcraft. I can't wait to read what happens next! That was a great cliffie!
This is a fabulous idea. Quite a new and interesting twist by landing Harry, Ron, and Hermione in the middle of the Salem Witch Trials. Your writing is great; you write just enough detail so that I feel like I can imagine it, and I understand the history of the Salem Witch Trials thanks to your information throughout the story and the excerpts at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh I like this. Its very good. I look forward to your next chapter! By the way, are you going to have any romance or anything in this? Its perfect just how it is, but if you were thinking about relationships it could work... Lol, sorry Im babbling now, Good Job!!!
Author's Response: No, sorry, no romance in this one. I didn't plan any at the start so I can't really add it now... I've written a lot of the fic already and romance would make no sense... :)
Oh my gosh how did sam suspect the trio or did I miss somthing? Oh good story. I like it different twist...
Author's Response: Hmm... I'll post the other chapters and if you are still confused then, then I'll explain... :)