You're taking your time on the updates- Hurry up! I've been checking every day for the last couple of weeks! Your story's so unique and great, please please PLEASE update! :) :) 10/10 for good measure!
i eally like this story and i think that all the effort that you have put into finding out all the historical information is great but is it reall a Dark/Angst fic coz right now it isn't looking like one love this story dont stop!
Your ideas are so creative! But you haven't updated in awhile, and that's- well - depressing! Anyways, great job and definately a cliff hanger. I hope you think of some sort of really exciting way for Harry and Ron to get Hermione out. Will they get her out while she's being led to platform? Or are they going to actually break her out of the jail? I think the first would be really exciting because there'd be a crowd of people and everything... Okay, I'm ranting. Hurry up and update, and an waesome story! 10/10
I went to Salem this June, and I find your info very accurate. I really like this story! I have a suggestion: Rebbecca Nurse, I beleive, was able to avoid execution because she was pregnant, and they didn't want to hang the innocent child, so in the end, when she had her baby, she avoided execution because the trials were over. Maybe Hermione could fake being pregnant or something. anyway, just a thought! I really enjoyed it, please continue!
Wow, I'll love what you have writen. The trials are so great to learn about. I'm such a fan of harry potter that I feel this just fits along wiht this
OMG please update soon!!! i will die if Hermione does!!!!!!!!
Love the story! I hope that Harry and Ron can figure something out. Please don't let Hermione die! I love the idea of the trio in Salem. Its great! Update soon!!!
Poor Hermione, nothing she or the boys can do. *Windens eyes in shock* Dumbledore! GET DUMBLEDORE!!! he will get Hermione out!! He'll send the whole bloody calvay, AND the Order to Hermione out!!! Or just ask for an appeal, and THEN prove Hermione is innoncent!!!! If it all fails... Hanging is 100 times better than buring at the stake. (My 8th grade social teacher told us that!)
This is a great chapter and I can see a lot of thought went into this. I think that it is interesting to see that three students(Harry, Hermione and Ron) are experincing the American history of 1600s...but one thing is troubling me. Magic is not stupid so wouldn't the Hogwarts of 1600s or to the story 1692 know that time travel occured and send someone to correct the event or the Minstery of Magic perhaps. Well can't wait to find out what happens next. PS... Get the boys to get Hermione out.
Author's Response: Well, the story needed a way to get the trio into the past and if the Ministry and fixed it all up, there wouldn't be much of a story, huh? I know, it is sort of dumb but I couldn't keep letting the Ministry stop everything before it got too bad... :D
After looking over books millions of times, wat about the nonverbal spells? (i 4got weather u need a wand or not, but in book 6 it mentiouned somthing)
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure you need a wand... and I can't let Harry and Ron have everything too easy!!
I have really enjoyed reading this, and hope that I will continue to do so. The only thing that I think you could really improve on would be coincedence. I personally find that a story is much more interesting if you can see a meaning behind everything, I know that is waht suspense is for, but it just seems wierd sometimes; I mean its not like they are going to think "I know that Voldemort is trying to kill me, what better way than to set an amulet in my path that transports me back, wandless, to a time where the punishment for magic is death, lets go pick up this potentially dangerous object on an impluse." I mean, Harry and Ron can be thick sometimes but I thought they learnt that lesson back in 2nd year? I am not trying to insult you and I really enjoy your story, but I think that you could work on that.
Author's Response: I understand what you're saying and maybe this is the wrong time to tell everyone but... my story will not have Voldemort in it at all. Nope... and the Salem Witch Trials may be the theme of this story but it isn't what the pint of this story in. Let's just say there's a hidden lesson which will become more apparent as the story progresses. :)
HURRY UP HARRY AND RON! 1 DAY LEFT! Hermione's gonna make it right? *wimpers*
great chapter! I felt so sorry for hermione... hope the ron and harry will think of somthing and I agree to short!
Author's Response: Okay, this is in reply to all reviews... Well, keep guessing guys! :) I'll submit the next chapter soon but I'm sort of held up with school work and I'm making changes in the chappies coming up. Anyway, the next chapter will bu up very soon!
Great chapter, I cant wait for the next! Poor Hermione, hopefully Ron and Harry will think of something soon. Real soon.
This chapter was great, though a little on the short side for you. I hope that Ron and Harry think of something that'll save Hermione soon. Update soon!!
Awesome chapter! I just hope Harry and Ron can think of something to do before its to late! I was thinking they could get their wands and blast their way out but you killed that theory! lol Oh well, anything as long as Hermione doesn't die! Update soon!
More than ever now I hope that Harry and Ron can think of something fast. I read your authors note saying that executions aren't normally that fast. However, to make it work with your story, I think the way you have it by being soon is much better. I hope Harry and Ron can find someway to help Hermione. I'm thinking that maybe they will be able to use some sort of wandless magic, but of course, I may be wrong.
tom shouldnt be called freak, even harry gets the respect(from the dursleys) of being called boy., other than that, good story, no really good story!:)
Author's Response: I called Ton a freak? Really? Let me double check...
Wonderful, very intriguing. You have written very close to history, which I also love, so this story is definitely one of my favorites. It is simply perfect. Not meaning I want Hermione to die or anything... Has Naima been able to say anything yet? oh yeah, 10/10 ;-)
omg omg omg! don't kill the witch! lol ur story is getting really good and i hope the three of them think of something soon before either of them get hurt!
Author's Response: I hope they can think of something too... :D