Reviewer: radcliffeluve456
Date: 04/24/06 16:32
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. keep it up!!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 04/24/06 15:55
Chapter: February 7th, 1692


Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 04/24/06 15:41
Chapter: February 3rd, 1692

Very good so far. Try reading The Crucible. It might give you some more insight into the Salem witch trials.

Reviewer: Hamm On Wry
Date: 04/24/06 11:08
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

I am surprised that you did not have HArry or Ron do that simplest of spells "accio wand!" in order to retrieve their wands. Since the game was up anyway, they could have done so with impunity, and then had a mass breakout to turn Salem upside having the Marauders with no Ministry of Magic to keep them in check...

Reviewer: zizzy333
Date: 04/21/06 22:31
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

Really great story! Keep up the good work!!! I have really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/21/06 21:55
Chapter: February 2nd, 1692

btw, i don't think glasses were made by Benjamin Fraklin yet. then again i don't remember the year, but they would have asked about Harry's glasses. just saying.
good chapter!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/21/06 21:40
Chapter: February 1st, 1692

long chapters are good! then there's more to read, but harder to write. excellent chapter!!!! you really made naima a great character!!!! keep it going!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/21/06 21:26
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

good idea!!!! i can tell i'll be enjoying the upcoming chapters!! ~Sara

Reviewer: rugbysnape
Date: 04/19/06 15:45
Chapter: February 1st, 1692

That was pretty good. A historical error though. The Salem Witch trials took place in Salem, Massachusetts, NOT Salem, Oregon. Oregon was not even a territory then. I knew what you meant though.

Reviewer: hermione23_granger
Date: 04/18/06 21:18
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

Good story, can't wait to find out what happens. I thought they were going to accuse Harry because of his "strange scar." Keep updating!

Reviewer: Morwen
Date: 04/14/06 15:36
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

*squees* You finally updated! Anyway, I liked this chapter although it was horrible that Harry and Ron lost their wands. But weren't there witches and wizards in the area? Perhaps they could get new wands from them? *is hopeful*

Author's Response: Muwhahaha! Wait and see.

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 04/13/06 23:36
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

I've been waiting months for this chapter!! Nonetheless, it was very good.

Reviewer: padfooot_emmy
Date: 04/10/06 15:07
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

yes finally you updated that was a very interesting depressing and SHORT! chapter update soon

Reviewer: crazyfish
Date: 04/07/06 18:31
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

i love the story......update soon!

Reviewer: crazyfish
Date: 04/07/06 18:10
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

hey, great story! just one thing (sorry!)- wouldn't the second term of the seventh year be in 1999? just random thinking...........

Reviewer: padfooot_emmy
Date: 03/16/06 16:42
Chapter: February 6th, 1692

this is absoltuly my faoritest story ever. i absolutly love histroy classes and such so this story is just really fun to read. please update soon 10/10

Reviewer: Dara
Date: 01/14/06 10:39
Chapter: February 6th, 1692

Good writing, but just a few things: 1.You said in you author's note that only one man was hanged for being a wizard. Actually I think John Alden, George Burroughs and John Proctor were all hanged and Giles Corey had stones piled up on his chest. 2. Was there really a Naima Becker? I don't remember any of the afflicted girls with that name. The first person to actually get one of those fits was Betty Parris an you said there was a girl who accused her own mother but Betty Parris didn't accuse her mother. 3. I think the town first had an examination, then the accused went to prison to await trial. They didn't decide to kill them right away. Also if the accused confessed during the trial they were freed. I'll still give you a ten though.

Reviewer: pUpPyLoVe123
Date: 12/09/05 10:37
Chapter: February 6th, 1692

i like dis story a lot. 1 thing though,"harry sat on the floor....he and harry were visiting..."just thought i`d let ya know!!!

Author's Response: Here's a response to all of the great reviews. Firstly, I'm finally back on track and I have submitted another chappie. Don't worry, this story will become a regular again. About the historical mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out, I really appreicate it and I'll be changing a few things ASAP. I can't always get things right and everyone who's helping me out in historical accuracy, thanks a lot. Another little note... Hermione could apparate out of the prison. Something I never ever thought about, stupid me.... but she's not going to. Pretend in her panic, she forgot and so did everyone else... I don't really want to change the whole story and if Hermione apparated out of the prison, I'd have to... Yes, I'm souding lazy and I'm sorry. Other than that there's not much to say except that I read all reviews and try to answer as best as I can... :)

Reviewer: dragonquill_814
Date: 11/27/05 15:10
Chapter: February 6th, 1692

I really like this story. Keep up the good work! One question, though. I why can't Hermione just Apparate out of her prison, or Harry and Ron use Apparation to retrieve their wands? Finally, I didn't get whether the spellbook was actually Hermione's. If it isn't, could it possibly have been Samantha's (she could have faked the name, though I don't know when she could have found out the middle name). *10/10*

Reviewer: madfoot
Date: 11/02/05 18:48
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

nevermind, it wasn't Rebbecca Nurse...

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