Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 05/10/06 18:43
Chapter: February 9th, 1692

Oh my!! Was Ron shot?? Thats so bad! How is Harry going to get the bullet out and heal him? Cna't wait for the next chapter!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sara Wood
Date: 05/10/06 18:32
Chapter: February 9th, 1692

Good! My only thing is, I thought Harry and Ron would be a bit more sad and depressed.

Reviewer: MidnightDraco
Date: 05/10/06 18:23
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

Hey, why does Ron had to be a thick head all the time!

Reviewer: Harrys Best Girl
Date: 05/08/06 3:15
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

how could you kill our beloved hermione?

Reviewer: Harrys Best Girl
Date: 05/08/06 2:57
Chapter: February 2nd, 1692

I couldn't hear harry saying this it iseems like something ron would say

-But she was just playing with tea leaves! It was probably just for fun, to try and tell fortunes. Divination is such an obscure branch of magic,

Author's Response: Well, he was panicking. I thought he'd say something strange, out-of-the-ordinary. About them being depressed... Hermione's death hasn't completly sunk in yet... just wait and see. :)

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 05/07/06 16:34
Chapter: February 8th, 1692

It was a good chapter... I too would have expected the to be a bit umm depressed? but good any ways

Reviewer: zizzy333
Date: 05/07/06 11:59
Chapter: February 8th, 1692

ohhh... I wonder- no! I shall wait and see! Update asap! (hey that rhymed!)

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 05/07/06 10:07
Chapter: February 8th, 1692

sad chapter, though good. i would ahve guessed that Ron would be, maybe not crying, but atleast tearing at Hermione's death. can't wait for the next chapter!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragonology
Date: 04/30/06 14:50
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

YOU'VE UPDATED!!! YES!!! well, NO!!!!!! Hermione!! You're joking, right? Please tell me it was a nasty, cruel joke! *sobs* Update soon!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 04/29/06 15:06
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
U MURDERER!!!! HOW DARE U!!!!! you KILLED Hermione. Why didn't u just let her go, and leave well enough alone?? Harry has lost almost everyone he knows, and now you kill off one of his first friends? *Starts crying* I CAN'T TAKE THIS NO MORE!!! Nice chappie , however!10/10 *clicks heels together 3 times* There's no place like home!!! *vanishes*

Author's Response: Wow. *blinks* Well, I had to kill Hermione. That was like my favorite part of the story so far. Anyway, I'll say here, I don't think you'll hate me too much once everything sinks in. :p

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 04/26/06 18:52
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

Ya'll is mighty cruel ta be killin' Hermione with the likes of tha gallows. Ya'll is mighty mean. Ya'll be understandin' me meanin' anyhows. Lovin' tha story. Ya'll be writin' more now. Ya'll hearin' that. Yer stories me favorite.

Reviewer: bellamente
Date: 04/24/06 23:24
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!! I'M CRYING RIGHT NOW I SWEAR!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER BUT HOW COULD YOU!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!! AND PLEASE BRING HERMIONE BACK TO LIFE, PLEASE!!

Reviewer: HogsmeadeGirl111
Date: 04/24/06 21:37
Chapter: February 1st, 1692

I really enjoyed the dialogue between Samantha and Naima, it really pronounced a very simplified yet elegant style of writing that I appreciate. Good job!

Reviewer: FireandIce92
Date: 04/24/06 20:08
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTULLY DID IT! I didn't really think you would! I'm in like shock now.

Reviewer: padfooot_emmy
Date: 04/24/06 18:09
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

GOSH WHYD YOU MAKE IT SO SAD YOU LIKE PRACTICALLY MADE ME CRY BUT IT WAS GOOD ALL THE SAME

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/24/06 17:31
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

omg!!!! i can't belive hermione's dead!!! thats so sad! and how are they going to get back now? ~Sara

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/24/06 17:25
Chapter: February 6th, 1692 - Later

oh damn!! thats sucks! i can't believe the beckers found their wands!! and they only got one! ~Sara

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/24/06 17:12
Chapter: February 5th, 1692

its good!! don't worry. you protrayed the trail well. ~Sara

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 04/24/06 17:06
Chapter: February 3rd, 1692

uh oh, wonder whats going to happen now!

Reviewer: radcliffeluve456
Date: 04/24/06 16:34
Chapter: February 7th, 1692

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. keep it up!!

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