Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 09/29/06 15:13
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Satyafakeer
Date: 09/17/06 10:40
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

February 11th, 1692 was three months ago. Review fast. YOu are spoiling the fun.
The story is doing very well. keep it coming at a regular pace. All the best.

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 07/16/06 2:39
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Very nice chapter

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 06/26/06 8:55
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

So Hermone isn't dead then? Or, she is, but....bah! This is confusing! Ha! But still, this is getting pretty good.

The part where Hermione didn't kill her past self, but her present self took me awhile to register. It was kind of confusing, to tell the truth.

So, How much research have you done in this fic? I mean, there are so many facts and stuff like that. Not to sound dumb, but that's a lot of research to put into a fic.

Well, I'm looking foward to later updates, very much!

Happy Writing!
--Han Solo

Author's Response: Hermione... is.... I'M NOT TELLING! Wait and see! That part was even more confusing to write... I tried to make it simple, but time travel and past deaths aren't always simple. :) I hope you got the meaning in the end! I did have to do a bit of research, but it was fun. The Witch Trials seem like something out of a story book! It was great. And since I still have to research a lot, it's still loads of fun. Updates coming soon everyone! My laptop had crashed and the power supply burned out so it took a while while I got a replacment power supply. Thanks for being patient!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 06/16/06 3:56
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Update!!! I love this fic and uyou haven't updated in... forever!!!!

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 06/07/06 15:13
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

I have caught up on this story and I likeit please continue to update!!!!!!

Reviewer: WilaminaShakespeare
Date: 05/31/06 6:19
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

Great story! You definitely have a firm grasp on J.K. Rowling's style of writing, but have added a bit of very distinctive feeling to it. This made your fic very fun to read, I must say. Also, you seem to know a lot about the history of the witch trials in Salem. There is, however, one error I should call to your attention: Mercy Warberk should be Mercy WARREN. I think she is probably the one you meant, as she was one of the accusers in the actual trials. Other than that, though, excellent job.

p.s. I have a bit of a request. Will you please read my first story when it comes out?

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 05/17/06 21:04
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

???? Update!!! This is so awesome!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hello dear readers! The next chapter should be up soon. I know it's been a while, but I've had (and am still having) incredible writer's block. It's like hitting a brick wall over and over again until your head just hurts tooooooo much to try hitting the wall again. So I had to take a short break. :) Anyway, next chapter SOON!

Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 05/17/06 19:51
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

ack! im going insane! i gotta know whats gonna happen! and whyd ya kill off hermy-own? waaaaa! but theres more to this and i read the last part and i cant type cuz its so good and waaa! i need to read it so i can get on w/ my life! um....idea wise......i dunno.
Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak!
~Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore~

Reviewer: HarrietJPotter
Date: 05/17/06 16:28
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

This story is amazing! It's such a good idea- I can't believe no one thought of it before! Poor Hermione though, that was a shocker!

Reviewer: Larachan
Date: 05/15/06 14:35
Chapter: February 10th, 1692 - Later

Okay I have a guess about the last part, it wasn't Voldemort's plan to take them back to the past, but Dumbledore's. The last two speekers may have been Dumbledore and Mc Galagony and about the twice thing I think it means death. Because after they die they can go back to their present, so they will die twice if we count their death in the past too, right?

Reviewer: KateH
Date: 05/15/06 7:09
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Great chapter!
"Why twice?" Is Dumbledore trying to make Harry stronger and able to overcome the possibility of his friends dying? Is he going to make Ron dead to Harry to prove his point?? That would be torture, I feel so bad for Harry! I hope I'm wrong, but it would make for a good story! 10/10 Great Job! Update!!

Reviewer: Sara Wood
Date: 05/14/06 21:21
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

OH MY GOSH! I'M SO EXCITED! MY DUMBLEDORE THEORY WAS RIGHT! Oh PLEASE EXPLAIN SOON THE REASON FOR BEING TRANSPORTED TO SALEM SOON!

Reviewer: FireandIce92
Date: 05/14/06 21:21
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Who were those pplz in the end? do we find out next chap? 10!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 05/14/06 19:53
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Nice ending to the chappie. Who are the 2 ppl in the end? Must be a student and a teacher... Is it Hermione? And Dumbledore? Dumbledore and Hermione watching Harry and Ron get hurt, and not even lifting a finger!! How could they? It's still a nice chapter, though. 10/10 UPDATE

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 05/14/06 14:22
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

Excellent! Hurry up with the next chapter!! The wait is killing me already!!
Okay, so Rebecca... is she going to come into the story? Because she should. She should be a regular muggle who was just TRYING to do witchcraft but couldn't, you know because she was curious. That's how it was with a lot of the people in Salem: the huge uproar about witchcraft made them curious, so some of them tried it, and sometimes they'd use these spices or whatever that were drugs that would make them hallucinate... and then of course they would get caught. And who the heck are those people at the end?!? GAHH!
So anyhoo... yeah, Rebecca should be in Lynn on her way back to Salem, and they run into her. And what's all this business with "why twice?" I'm just dying of curiosity!
And also- I'm getting pretty tired of Ron not facing up to the facts. Give him a good, swift kick in the... nevermind.

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 05/14/06 12:37
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

I like the thing at the end. It gives us some ideas that will keep us on our toes. You are seriously one of the best authors I have ever read anything from. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 05/14/06 11:04
Chapter: February 11th, 1692

So he was Dumbledore. But i still don't understand why he didn't help. I guess he's trying to teach them a lesson about death. I still think they should meet another wizard to help them out. I think it should just be a wizard from that tim, not someone else in disguise. ~Sara

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 05/14/06 10:33
Chapter: February 10th, 1692 - Later

i think they should go to Lynn Town and then perhaps run into a man that is a real wizard like them. or maybe in the next town they come to after Lynn. I think they should come across the man after they accidentally see him using his wand. the man runs but they chase after him because they want to talk to him, where as he thinks they want to hang him. but eventually they get to him and he invites them into his house and harry and ron tell the man their story and how they can't get back to their time and about hermione.

i hope you liked my idea! ~Sara

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 05/13/06 23:39
Chapter: February 10th, 1692 - Later

I love this fic!! Keep updating!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks and I will! Next chapter has been sent in!

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