Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 01/02/07 22:29
Chapter: February 14th - February 15th 1692

wow. this story started out so cool, and now it is so intensely powerful. normally i don't read stories until they're finished because i hate getting stopped in the middle, but this was too unique for me to pass up. i can't wait to see how you end it.

Reviewer: Lily of the US
Date: 01/02/07 19:41
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

ok. first of all i have several points to make, which i am going to make here b/c i am too lazy to review what happens in every chapter after the chapter it happens in.

Number 1- no, Hermione does not die. I refuse. she is my favorite character and she can't die.

Number 2- very confusing. if Rebecca was supposed to be hanged, then hermione showed up, but rebecca was supposed to be already in Salem, then why wouldnt Rebecca, hermione and emily get hanged instead of just hermione and emily?

Number 3- i liked that you added DUMBledore to the story. but why would he send the trio to Salem if he knew hermione was going to die?

ok, well, even if hermione did die (which is, by the way, impossible) i think it is a really good story. keep writing1

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 01/02/07 19:00
Chapter: February 14th - February 15th 1692

I read this story a while ago, but I don't think I reviewed. (log-in problems, hopefully better now.) I recently read the Crucible, so it was very interesting to see Salem mixed with Harry. Rebecca Nurse was an old lady, btw. I am very curious to see where you are going with all these clues. You write excellent cliffies.

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 01/02/07 17:59
Chapter: February 14th - February 15th 1692

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god!!! Don't let Ron die!! No!!! Anyway, great chapter!! Can't wait till the next one! ~Sara

Reviewer: aliauthor
Date: 01/02/07 17:41
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

wowie wow wow this is a great story and idea! This is going into my favorites!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 01/02/07 16:29
Chapter: February 14th - February 15th 1692

AHHHHH!!! THESE CLIFFHANGERS ARE SO UNBEARABLE!! You just keep getting better and better at that!! I'm so happy with the frequent updates, and I can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/02/07 16:02
Chapter: February 14th - February 15th 1692


They were too happy! I knew something bad would happen! I was hoping a bear would chase them or soemthing! No! No no no! Not this! No! This is horrible!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 12/21/06 22:41
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

HUH? Thoroughly confused. Excellent cliff-hanger, and thanks much for updating so quickly, it was thoroughly satisfying!
By the way, you chapters are a mite short. Couldn't you make them longer so that we don't have to wait so long for such a tiny bit of plot?
Thanks, I'm still much enjoying the story!

Reviewer: KateH
Date: 12/21/06 16:54
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

Love it love it! Okay, is Rebecca someone who is going to be hanged?? Is she Rebecca Nurse?? Update! Update!

Reviewer: Dani Marie
Date: 12/21/06 13:04
Chapter: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

I absolutly love this story! It's different from alot of the others I have read. It goes into great detail, and throughout the chapters so far, I've been able to paint a mental picture in my mind. I'm trying to figure out who sent them, obviously someone must have. hmm. Well, fantastic writing! Update soon!!

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 12/21/06 12:01
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

weird! so i think that you should answer more questions next chapter! she was hanged? why are harry and ron talking to people who have been hanged? pleeeease update soon! i really like the story

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 22:44
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

I guessed that too. She seemed a lot like Hermione, and the bartender has blue eyes. I hate Dumbledore. He is JKLFDJGHKLS. And you! You terrible person! You write a good story and you leave us with worry, confusion, and yearning for more. We hope we get answers but as we read we get more questions. You evil evil person. Good job *glares*

I’m still upset that you killed Hermione off. Also Ron is going to die soon. Yep.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 22:32
Chapter: February 14th, 1692

That was horrible. That was like a slap in the face. This is bad. I hate DUMBledore!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 22:22
Chapter: February 11th, 1692


Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 22:07
Chapter: February 10th, 1692 - Later

I bet you Douglas is an ancestor of Dumbledore. I bet you he is a wizard and he heard Ron talking about the wand. For some reason I think that the trio was sent to Salem as some sort of sick lesson DUMBledore was trying to teach. I guess they're a duo now. Poor Hermione.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 21:53
Chapter: February 10th, 1692

What? The men that live there didn't attack them? Ron and Harry really need to talk. Poor Hermione!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 12/20/06 21:49
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

The mystery continues. You've really got me going. I can't wait for the next chapter (almost literally).

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 21:43
Chapter: February 9th, 1692


Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 21:31
Chapter: February 8th, 1692

Yes they could go to Hogwarts! Whoever sent them there is no friend. Oh my gosh! I can't believe Hermione is dead. Are you sure she is dead?

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 12/20/06 21:28
Chapter: February 14th, 1692 - Later

Short chapter, but it was nice!! I liked it!! ~Sara

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