Reviewer: better_than_broadway
Date: 07/10/06 20:43
Chapter: Leaving Home

Very Good story.

Reviewer: shanneib0920
Date: 07/03/06 21:53
Chapter: Dangerously Said

omg for a minute i thought harry killed ron!!!!!1

Reviewer: Xavier
Date: 05/28/06 22:15
Chapter: Leaving Home

Good story but I dont like how weak you make Harry seem

Reviewer: Xavier
Date: 05/28/06 20:11
Chapter: Painful Changes

Good starting chapter

Reviewer: harrysgrrl
Date: 05/12/06 14:30
Chapter: Striking Beauty

my name's melody!

Reviewer: PottersFire
Date: 04/22/06 5:27
Chapter: Leaving Home

Oh, awesome story! I can't wait until the next chapter! You write so well and keep me in horrible suspense!

Reviewer: shangi
Date: 04/16/06 15:11
Chapter: Leaving Home

great story, but it makes one feel like Harry's the weak one in this story.

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 04/15/06 0:57
Chapter: Betrayal: Found and Ignored

i may sound like Hermione but i am getting sick of nearly every story the have people Disapparting when you cant in school grounds!
but ur a good auther! 10/10 :)

Author's Response: Thank you, but if you are talking about the final scene, you must remember that they are no longer on school grouds.

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 04/12/06 20:30
Chapter: Dangerously Said

jey ur a really good writer! but 1 thing: Its fine. For a while there, I felt like a goody-two-shoes. this line its not just an amrcan saying we have it ere in australia 2. so i think u should have said "never mind its just a saying i know". anyway 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!

Reviewer: KenTuck
Date: 04/11/06 16:35
Chapter: Striking Beauty

This is really good. I love that you really developed a new character well, and it has muggle world stuff while still having the wizarding worl we love. I really enjoy reading this.

Reviewer: mkmwrite
Date: 08/24/05 9:53
Chapter: Painful Changes

I loved this and the sequel. I got some of the inspiration for my story from your story

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 05/26/05 20:42
Chapter: Leaving Home

Wonderful story! I quite liked your character Melody. The scene with Voldemort could have used a little work, but the rest of the story was fantastic. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Reviewer: natashapotter1991
Date: 03/23/05 23:28
Chapter: Leaving Home

cool story !! 10/10 ...what is teh sequel called not matter ill find it !!!

Author's Response: The sequel is The Last Line...and if anyone else is reading this, you should all be heading to read chapter 1-5...six is having some troubles.

Reviewer: bball33
Date: 03/09/05 17:29
Chapter: Leaving Home

im glad that ron and 'mione came to help harry. i cant wait to read the sequel.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 01/13/05 22:12
Chapter: Leaving Home

that's IT!?!??! rar...

Author's Response: Actually, The Last Line is the sequel to this one. I'm glad you likes The American Revolution.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 01/13/05 20:16
Chapter: Lonely Mistakes

seriously laugh out loud--- hahhaha Seamus. too funny. i'mr eally interested! I'm glad that the story was already done when i found it! makes less waiting! great job so far- and now, i go back to reading! i'll comment again later on!

Reviewer: nymphadoratonks
Date: 01/03/05 19:22
Chapter: Leaving Home

omg! oh my god, peoples!! that was horrible!!! how could her mother DO that?? (yes, i know, after all that's happened...) still, i hope she goes and finds harry again. and couldn't her mother at least wait until the end of term??

Reviewer: Hermione2008
Date: 01/01/05 19:54
Chapter: Leaving Home

this was sad but lets up she gets back to Harry

Reviewer: Atarwyn
Date: 12/31/04 13:37
Chapter: Leaving Home


Reviewer: Amilia Navarre
Date: 12/30/04 14:29
Chapter: Painful Changes

Great I read every chapter,every word. You are a brilliant author.

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