omg for a minute i thought harry killed ron!!!!!1
Good story but I dont like how weak you make Harry seem
Oh, awesome story! I can't wait until the next chapter! You write so well and keep me in horrible suspense!
great story, but it makes one feel like Harry's the weak one in this story.
i may sound like Hermione but i am getting sick of nearly every story the have people Disapparting when you cant in school grounds!
but ur a good auther! 10/10 :)
Author's Response: Thank you, but if you are talking about the final scene, you must remember that they are no longer on school grouds.
jey ur a really good writer! but 1 thing: It’s fine. For a while there, I felt like a goody-two-shoes.” this line its not just an amrcan saying we have it ere in australia 2. so i think u should have said "never mind its just a saying i know". anyway 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!
This is really good. I love that you really developed a new character well, and it has muggle world stuff while still having the wizarding worl we love. I really enjoy reading this.
I loved this and the sequel. I got some of the inspiration for my story from your story
Wonderful story! I quite liked your character Melody. The scene with Voldemort could have used a little work, but the rest of the story was fantastic. I can't wait to read the sequel!
cool story !! 10/10 ...what is teh sequel called not matter ill find it !!!
Author's Response: The sequel is The Last Line...and if anyone else is reading this, you should all be heading to read chapter 1-5...six is having some troubles.
im glad that ron and 'mione came to help harry. i cant wait to read the sequel.
that's IT!?!??! rar...
Author's Response: Actually, The Last Line is the sequel to this one. I'm glad you likes The American Revolution.
seriously laugh out loud--- hahhaha Seamus. too funny. i'mr eally interested! I'm glad that the story was already done when i found it! makes less waiting! great job so far- and now, i go back to reading! i'll comment again later on!
omg! oh my god, peoples!! that was horrible!!! how could her mother DO that?? (yes, i know, after all that's happened...) still, i hope she goes and finds harry again. and couldn't her mother at least wait until the end of term??
this was sad but lets up she gets back to Harry
tgtnc
Great I read every chapter,every word. You are a brilliant author.
