noooooo.....another cliffhanger! One question, though...went you wrote about the one book, did you imagine Harry being in there, and with what team(s)?
hmmm. it would be nice if everything was going to be alright, but i have a feeling there is more stuff coming...GREAT STORY! SO GOOD!!! :D
haha! they're using seamus to practice on! perfect!! and draco is a ****** i dunno what to call him!! my god!!
HAHA!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!! oh, so hilarious. yes, i do feel bad for ron and melody as well. ;D
DOUBLE yay!!! melody's cousin is tonks!!! (my fave character, as seen in my bio.) and really, hermione and ron are s'posed to be together. and oooooh, who was behind the tree?? i'll bet anyone anything that it was someone evil...
yay!!!! melody is in gryfindor, AND fleur is teaching at hogwarts. (i'm very interested in the rumors thst fleur WILL be the new defense teacher.) :D
you are totally welcome!! :) you deserve it, this is a great story!!!
i can't wait for more But will Harry Ron Hermione and melody become friends agian?
yay! But, if you don't mind me saying, Melody jumps from boy to boy alot, doesn't she? lol And she seems ( by what she said about her being the 'picture of perfection' sounds a bit conceied, don't you think? (sorry if this offends you, I don't mean to sound rude!)
Author's Response: Explaination for Melody's actions: #1 - She is very troubled by her fight with Harry. #2 - Being in France reminds her of home.
Author's Response: Oops, hit enter...continuing - #3 - Marcus.....(it's a secret) Why she jumps from boy to boy?? She hasn't been with Ron for two months and Draco was an accident. Sorry if I sound bitter, I'm not, just trying to clarify so no one gets the wrong idea bout Melody. Also, there is a reason to the madness!
GREAT JOB!!! you have all the characters completely down. (they are all perfectly in character and everything!) i wonder what house melody's gonna be in??? anyway, great story! keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!
wow!! i just found your story, and thought it looked interesting. sounds great so far. it's really cool the way you're writing about a beaubatons girl. by any chance, will there be a triwizard this year?? that way melody could see all her old friends from beaubatons. that would be so cool!! but it's your story, and i'm sure whatever you write will be wonderful. i love your story, and will DEFINATELY keep reading. i'm glad there are so many chapters!! =)
so what does the title mean? it's really good i can't wait for more
Hmm, Well I'll say this. It would seem in order to strengthen Melody's character you have drastically moved Ron, Harry and Hermione out of character. And the story could do with alittle less fluff and some more actual plot. That said I really like the way you've portraited Draco, if I see one more fic where Draco is a good guy I think I'll scream. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I understand where your coming from, but wait till it gets closer to the end. Thanks!
how sweet (pokes ur nose) can't wait till xmas lol hurry up now
so sweet! i can't wiat for more. anywho
Author's Response: Chapter 11 and 12 are both written, 11 needs to be okayed though! Keep checking!
ooh I love it! Harry is so sweet! Hermione and Ron are...well I will not say what I really think of them. I can't wait for the next chapter.
write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, but during the week I have to do my homework first. I still try for a chapter at least every other day!
