Wow...I just printed out the last 13 pages of this because my comp kept restarting and I wanted to make sure that I finished it. Absolutely amazing. I lovee it. I am hoping that there is another part to this story but I think there might be so i'll go check. Brilliantly done. One of the best I've ever read. :)
hey i'm french ! i think your story is original ! it's cool that you put some french words in your story !!!
OK, ew. if Tonks is Melody's cousin then that would make Malfoy her cousin as well. i think, not too sure though
that was an asome story you should keep it up and right more after this series.
i want 2 add this 2 my favs.
Hello there! I'd like to say, first off, that this is a wonderful story--I am sad to report that I can only read the first chapter, due to time constraints. But, I will do my best to leave you with a satisfactory review.
On the subject of your main character, Melody Chancelle. I like how you fit in a little French heritage there--very nice! At the moment, I can see that she listens to her mother and respects her, but doesn't like to be alone. She is thoughtful of those around her and likes her share of company. She is neat and knows where everything is, which I would LOVE to be able to do (XD), and isn't afraid to make new friends.
On the subject of your writing: I think you have a very unique style of writing, and I like it. I like how you introduce your characters. From a beta stand point, I can't really find anything...well, for lack of a better word, wrong. ^^'
I want to ask why she is transferring to Hogwarts. Why not go to an American school? It would obviously be much, much closer than going to Hogwarts.
Well, that's all I have to say. I love this story, and hope I can finish it sometime soon.
--Kathy
btw, there ARE no "houses" @ beauxbatons!
Yo, wtf? Sorry, i like your story bbbbbbut it really REALLY annoys me that people spell her name wrong. FLEUR! not "Fluer'! It is FLEUR DELACOUR! and in englisg that means: flower of the garden! geez.
and i didnt meen to spaz on u, but i IS really annoying, especialy if your family is french and you understand what it all means. so, just so you know, it is FLEUR not FLUER!
good-day! *walks away*
I love it so far! Just one question - if Melody lives in Beverly Hills, why isn't she going to Salem Academy? :)
i have one question, but i am only on chapter 6 how can Ron and Melody be in love when it is in Harry/othercharactor?
this is what ive read so far and for one Mel=Malfoy???? EWWWWW MUCH!!!!!!!!!
YAY now this is a ship I like! Harry/Mel is sooo perfect, I love it! Now we're getting to see another side of her so she isnt the usual perfect little mary-sue charcter! Im lovin' it!
OMG I knew this was going to happen Ron amd Mel jsut arent right for each other...
I cant wait till the formal, I wonder what will happen.............
Why the owls name sparx, does it have anything to do with the sctual writer sparx? Anyeays for some reason I dont htink Ron and mel are right for each other, there just to different.
I bet you anything its Hermione, or maybe not.....
YAY shes in gryffindor, it was expected but its still a great thing. I love the way melody is acting over Ron and making him turn red whenever she gets the chance, very funny!
Wow shes a Mary-sue but ah well, I like her. I cant wai tto read what happens next. the long chapters are simply brilliant!
I loved it! This is only my econd exchange studentish fic evr and im loving it! Though I must say melody is turning out to be a bit Mary-sueish.... I hope she develops a personality in the next few chappies. Good job hun!
