“I want you to watch over everyone in this room,” the man named Moody said. “They could all use your help. . . And don’t be afraid to smack around the blonde one back there,” he hadded, jabbing his thumb behind him. “Got a mouth him, he does.”
Draco made a face behind the wizard. “I saw that,” he growled. “And don’t think I won’t be checking up on you from time to time.”
My favorite part in this chapter
“Honestly, ridiculous things, really,” she said bitterly. “You should see Moody with it. And his is pink.” A mischievous grin curled her lips.
I love that line
omg i love the tonks idea for fairy godmother i would have never thought of that its awsome
just like "Ever After" which is one of my favorite movies
1100/10
Oh this was the best story ever! I LOVED Cinderella and I love this Harry Potter version. Harry and Ginny are living happily ever after!
i know! that was my favorite line.
moody with a pink wand? NO?!?!?!Who would have guessed? lol
haha.tonks? awwww.yes ur rite. tonks will be quite an unorthodox fairy godmother?
cool story
i loved how tonks was like the fairy godmother that was so funny
and i like how draco was a good guy
lol
it reminded me alot of the movie ever after like the ending anyways
WOW this story took me back to when I was all about princesses and barbie dolls. (eww!!)
But I love the story because It showed friendship between Draco and Harry.
I am also a fan of H/G fics so you can imagine.
-comewhatmay
Tis a wonderful story
"And don’t be afraid to smack around the blonde one back there,” he hadded, jabbing his thumb behind him. “Got a mouth him, he does.” Muahaha. I loved Draco in this one. Great! Very fun story. Gosh, when was the last time I saw Disney's Cinderella? Whoa...Eh whatever. There were quite a few mistakes- wrong spellings, and wrong words, stuff like that. Not too bad, though.
it was a wonderful story.
i loved this chapter it was vvery funny
tonks is ginny's godmother that is worth gold i can't belive it
i like the story very much so far and i think that harry and draco being best friends in a different sircunstance than the one ther really luive in is very plausible and ione might even say likly. and it is a lovley story.
A very nice job. I noticed some references to the movie Happily Ever After with Drew Barrymore. Nice touch :)
aww!! i was grinning the whole way :D
Wonderful use of fluff and happiness:D:D