Tonks is the most HILARIOUS fairy godmother ever! I love how Moody's wand is
pink.
Oh my gosh! "You're a prince, aren't you supposed to be charming?"
Sorry, many mistakes.. You need a better Beta Reader
"Honestly, this all had to be some bizarre dream, really."That is how reading this story felt. I loved all the references to Ever After, they made me laugh, and I enjoyed how people ended up in your story... Moody the fairy with a pink wand for instance.
And Tonks took a liking to Remus, did she? Haha.
This was very funny. I would think this could fit in the Humor category very easily. Thank you for a fun read.
I must say i never really thought about stories like this with harry potter. But it was very creative and you did a nice job making harry potter and cinderella work. Good job. :)
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. I love how you kept James, Lily, and Sirius alive, for one. Two, Im glad you put Tonks in here because shes my favorite charater. And finally third, I like how you made Draco a good guy, but I would prefer if Ron was Harry's best mate.
All in all,
It was Bloody Brilliant!!
- ThexWitchesxSeeker
that was a great take of AU!! a mix between cinderella and drew barrymore movie ever after, yes? anyway it works really well and you should be really proud of this fic. good work!
Danikay
The part of what Ginny's father said to her made me tear up a bit, that might have been because of PMS but still that was so sweet!
That was cute.....keep up the good work
OMG!!! this story was so wonderfully awesome!!! I loved how Lily said "Divorce is only something they do at Durmstrang". I love "Ever After". It was my mom's favorite movie. I loved everything in it!!!!
Aw that was super magnificently the sweetest story I have ever writen! It was soo unique too!! I love Tonks and Lupin in this! And Moody was such a laugh! This is the most unique Harry/Ginny story I ever heard. but what happened to Ron and Hermione? Other than that this is amazing def on my fav list!!
Ooo Intersting! SO Tonks and Remus must get together right now! Oh don't forget Rona nd Hermione!! ANd even after reading this I think Draco needs someone... Psh just kidding!!
Ha i agree with your mum! Even mine laughed!! I always dream that whats happeneing to Ginny would happen to me with this one amazing guy that has told me many times that he hates me. I simply love Tonks in this one!!
Aw I was wondering if Tonks would be in here!! Yay shes my favorite!! I can't wait for Harry to gaze into Ginnys eyes and ask her to marry him (i hope i ddint give away the ending=D)
COol. I see Rita is still ebing well Rita. I can't wati for you to describe Ginnys moms dress! I really want her and Harry to meet again. Oh and good thing Fleurs gone shes a bit snobby for me in this fic.
Okay whta Fleur didnt WASNT COOL!!! I reallyy reallyy hope Ginny can go to the ball, but of corse she will all storys like this have a endign like that =)
Yeah well... I have one tiny question if Ginyn and Ron are magic can't they clean their robes and Hermione could fix Rons leg!! Hmm just wondering
