This was a very real fic. It's odd how photo's make you remember all sorts of stuff, songs and smells and phrases do the same for me. I really lived in this fic. I've never lost a Ron, like Hermione did, but I doubt I'd be strong enough to say goodbye like that. I'd probably just live in the past and waste away, but I guess Hermione had the rest of the Weasley's. Well written.
What!?
That was so sad!
I thought it would be happy!
It was really sweet, but I cried so much.
That's a good thing, you should be happy that your writing brings out so much amotion in people.
Good job!
that was to sad. it made me cry...
Awww...that brought tears to my eyes!!!
Oh. My. God. You write this beautifully, it is an amazing piece of work. Ron can't die!!! I can feel her pain, and throughout the piece there is emotion portrayed the way that maked the reader feel it. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, that's a great compliment!
Extremely sad. Obviously, that's what you're going for... it had me in tears! If J.K. Rowling kills of of the trio off like that... well, anyway, 8/10. Because Ron was one of my two favorite characters (Hermione being the other)!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, I know what you mean, I'd hate for any of them to die (especially not how I wrote Ron out!). The only reason I picked Ron is that I found it too hard to write Hermione dying and write it well, this way just seemed to work.
i swear, all of the sad stories are the best! i hate these story's because they make me cry because i think about the probable and the inevitable, but i love them because there so darn good! wonderful story! i can just imagine what that must be like, to loose someone the same night they propose to you! gah! id die, i wouldnt be killed, id just up and die or a broken heart( regardless of what some say, you can die of a broken heart!)
Author's Response: Thanks for R&R. Of course you can die of a broken heart, I believe that too :)
Sad ofcourse. Im hoping for a no one dies at the end of book 7 kinda person, but your story truely was great. One thing that you did that was good was letting Hermione let go of Ron and move on. She is a bright witch and the world is hers to work for. You don't portray her as some girl who goes crazy or become closed which I think is good. Good job. Going to check if you got any other stories.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for the positive comments. I haven't written anything else yet - I lost interest for a while after HBP and now I've got exams and stuff. Hopefully I'll write some more over this summer though.
Wow. I almost cried at the very end when she was at his grave. Very sad, but very good. Nive work.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing.
That was an amazing story!!! Are you writing more?
Author's Response: Thanks. I should be writing more soon - I lost interest for a while but it's back again, so expect something in the near future :)
wow!! that was amazing!!!! i cried!!!!!! excellent writing by the way. i liked how you went back and forth between the present and the past. great fic!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I think the past to present and vice-versa worked well and I'm glad you liked it!
OH MY GOD. i think that was the saddest fic i have ever read! i seriously cried HARD. but, it was very well written. have you written any other fics?
Author's Response: thanks very much. No, I haven't written anything else yet - I haven't really had time!
sooooo sad although some things are a little unlikely, like voldemort coming so soon, it was very powerful, moving, and so wonderful that i've added it to my favorites! keep writing great stories like this, it was flippin sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks. I know, that is a little unlikely but I had to keep the story moving! Thank you, I'll keep writing :)
Wow, that was really good! I really liked it. One bit of constructive critisism though. At the very end Hermione seemed a bit, I don't know, cold. The story it self was great. I give you a 9/10!
Author's Response: thanks :) I think that's just her finally accepting it after years, and forcing herself to say goodbye one last time was hard. Thank you, much appreciated.
tooooooo sad sorry goood writing very good writing but its was to sad for me
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I wondered if it might've been too sad myself, but I thought I'd just about got the balance right - I didn't want it to be too unrealistic or too depressing!
Very good- but definitely a tear jerker.... why Ron?!! 9/10 for you though- excellent writing.
Very good- but definitely a tear jerker.... why Ron?!! 9/10 for you though- excellent writing.
Author's Response: I just started writing Hermione's memories, and I'm a R/Hr shipper - go figure! Thanks very much for reviewing.
That was just... wow... It was beautiful and so sad. I just loved it. I can't wait for you to write more. Good job. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate you reviewing.
Oh my gosh, I was SOBBING!!! Great job!! Write a new fanfic soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much, and I will write more - hopefully not killing Ron off again any time soon!
