that ending was a bit rushed....will u write a sequel to this story?? i really enjoyed reading it! i wish it hadnt ended so soon... :(
I like it. I can't wait to get to the marauder era it was CATEGORIZED FOR.
Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, Prongs,
Still the legend
Rages on.
Two are dead and one
Turned bad.
One remains,
though four they had.
Author's Response: Nice poem but I'm speculating whether or not this is some sort of spam...
very original. i like the title. a bit confusing at first, but it all made sense at the end. the charlie plot line was hilarious! 10/10!
the mystery behind the veil is very interesting... though i think that the ending was a little abrupt.
wow! umm...I really wasn't expecting this ending at all. kind of random, kind of wierdly creative. I liked the story.
i really like this story! a werewolf AND a vampire. if monicula does teach at hogwarts, dean would surely be delighted. he had joked around at the end of the third book that maybe next year they'll get a vampire for a teacher.
please update fast I love this story
And another great chapter! It's getting... No, it's not getting better, because it was very good at the first chapter already.
Ah, anyway: Update fast, I want to read the next chapter.
Ooh, lurving this story, thought of young Lupin and Sirius(both hopefully good-looking) makes me feel happy.
I love this story, i have an odd obssesion with vampires and will read pretty much anything wrtten about them...but this story isn't anything, it's amazing and I'm hungry for more.
More story, more, please. It's amazing.
I likes, lots. I love vampire stories, can't get enough of them, So i'm gkad your writing this story and i'll stay with it till the end.
Great story! MORE! *puppy eyes* Keep up the good work!
Great story! MORE! *puppy eyes* Keep up the good work!
Wow! I realy like this story. I think it's a good idea to actually use a vampire. I've added it to my favorites immediatly. 10!
Author's Response: thanks so much! the second chapter is in queue so watch out for it!
Hullo, it's Madnessisme from MnFF here ... thought I'd drop a review! There were a few minor errors (Not much, just a bit of ... what's it called? Punctuation? Nevermind ... just the placing of commas and randomstuff and all that). Anyhow, that aside, I find this story really fascinating. The other inhabitants of that house ... are they really dead? Long story short, good job. Keep it up!
Author's Response: yes the other inhabitants are dead but they will show up again thanks for the review. chapter 2 is coming soon!