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Reviews For Age of Innocence

Name: leslie8907 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/05 15:33 · For: The Reveal
I think she slept with Harry and Ron. Bad bad girl!

Author's Response: Very good, you caught the clues! Now the question is why. I submited the next chapter so when it's out of queue I hope everyone enjoys it.

Name: GinnyWeaslyisourQueen (Signed) · Date: 07/30/05 15:21 · For: The Reveal
*blink blink blink, shakes head in confusion* WTF????Not know who the father is????*kneels down* Let it not be Draco,NOT DRACO NOT DRACO, Let it be Ron!!!!!!!!! Okay, I will be very intrested to see where this goes. 8/10

Author's Response: I promise it's not Draco!

Name: Christy_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 07/30/05 14:38 · For: The Reveal
Really excellent, very direct and to the point, interesting, please update ASAP!

Name: Christy_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 07/30/05 14:29 · For: The Reveal
Ron!Ron!Ron!Ron! Please let it be Ron!!!

Name: Sorn (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 21:06 · For: The Reveal
You say next chapter than that is all you get. Better make it good to keep me in this one.

Name: Linda Potter (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 18:03 · For: The Reveal
oh my God! you're a great writer, i like the way you write to express Hermione's feelings. Good story, i can't jet imagine Hermione being a slut! Anyway hope Ron's the father. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Hermione isn't a slut I promise. It would be too out of character. It'll all be explained in the next chapter though.

Name: Accio_Chocolate (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 17:13 · For: The Reveal
you described the pic very well, especially Hermione's expression. Yay if Ron is the daddy (hope you make the right choice!) have a peanutbutter cookie (#)

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I must say though to everyone...yes Harry being the father would be predictable, but so would making Ron the father because everyone wants him to be. Now I don't know what to do. My husband even told me to make Draco the father to throw everyone off, but I can't fit that in. =)

Name: CWeasley (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 11:23 · For: The Reveal
So far so good... I enjoyed the first chapter. A little predictable if Harry does end up being the "daddy" ... Guess we'll find out!

Name: Roxy Black (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 8:02 · For: The Reveal
By any chance could Harry be the father? It might be a bit predictable if that is the case. (hoping Ron will be the father though even if Hermione slept with Harry too.) Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up, you're a really good writer!!!

Author's Response: You know I actually haven't decided who the daddy is yet. I guess I'll figure it out when we get there.

Name: Walkingundead (Signed) · Date: 07/29/05 2:29 · For: The Reveal
"WHOA!" that is a direct quote. VERY interesting start. Keep it up!

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