Reviews For Moon Rays
Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/30/06 19:13
Chapter: Moons

The rhyme scheme is a bit odd, but this is still a nice, short poem.

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny_rox
Date: 08/25/05 13:18
Chapter: Moons

Irealy loved it I though it was great, although there is one spot that is a little messed up (The 3rd and 4th lines in the first stanza) If you just changed Sane so tht it was a word that went with Come I think that it would be perfect. la la la anyway I give you A 9/10 Ps. I realy did love it though!

Author's Response: Thank you been for your review! I love it when peple review. Look, it's my like first or second poem, so it's kind of just a bad one! Thank you, though!

Reviewer: SparrowsGirl01
Date: 08/16/05 15:06
Chapter: Moons

HEY!!!! this is ashley, hpgurl2121, and i can't find my password!!! lovely, huh? anywho, i'm at ur house, and ur fake crying cuz u have no reads or reviews, so i thought i would comfort you. lol! great poem. i really like it. luv WEREWOLVES!!!!!!! we all know they are awesome! especially Lupin... bnut we r both biased...we have soft spots 4 him... lol! c u in like, two seconds! P.S. i hate the music u r playing, no offense. Q92 is preferred to hard rock.

Author's Response: HI! Thank you for finally reviewing something! :) Anywho, I think I got the hair cut off a bit TOO short, and now, I don't like it too well. I need a hat! lol! Loving the bangs, tho, but they could be a little longer. U no what? My mom and sis both don't like it too well! I feel really stupid, so I guess I'll wear ponytails. U need to update! Yeah, Q92 is so much better than rock! lol! :) Can't wait for school!

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