loved the trampoline bit haha!
loool, you sure love Sirius don't you?
Well I review (kind of), but I don't add quotes.
I figure that since you've already finished, the next chapter will have it's own quotes :P
LOOOOOL, THAT WAS HILARIOUS! :P
Awww, as soon as he got that letter I knew his parents were dead.
AAWWW, IT'S TOO SAD! ):
moree voolllldddyyy, i like it (:
“They so obviously like each other,” Lily muttered to James.
“I know. Why don’t they just get together? They’re right there,” James said.
“I hate people who are in denial like that,” Lily said.
“I know, right?” James said. “Let me show you around.”
That was so funny! They're oblivious to the fact that they're like that too :P
Sirius and Addy are too cute
Why is Mac going with them, that's not gonna go down well :S
Aww, that was really cute with Sirius and Addy! So sweet
Awww, Remus&Maimee will me a good couple, and Sirius&Addy when they get around to it (:
Of course James&Lily will be awesome as well :P
I use Veet, it's kind of the same stuff.
Ahk, I love this! Gotta keep reading to see how it plays out! 1/5 of the way there :D
NOOOO!! HOLD ON JAMESS!! ):
Lily's starting to see the true James Potter (: