Reviews For Potter's Charm
Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 10/18/11 22:04
Chapter: I Don't Wanna Be

Fave quote:

He cupped her face in his hands and brought his lips to hers. And there, they had one of their first real kisses, alone on the beach when the sun was setting. As Sirius would say, ‘How sweet, but totally clichéd’.Actually, he would most likely say something along the lines of,'Addy babe, that could be you and me'. Yet, nothing really mattered to them at that moment other than being themselves.

Reviewer: Sirius_Lily_James
Date: 10/05/11 2:42
Chapter: Good Riddance

3)The ones in Florida
4)Addy, how did you get in my dreams? Well, you're always here, but never clothed!
5)Sirius + Addison
6)More Sirius!

Reviewer: Sirius_Lily_James
Date: 10/03/11 19:21
Chapter: Slipped Away

This is my third time reading this story and it's AMAZING!!! I love you, Sirius!!! Awww, I feel so bad for him now that Addy's gone! :'( I cried when I read that part... My favourite couple... definetly Sirius and Addy.

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 14:23
Chapter: Who Knows?

My life is like watermelon. I don’t have to use ink to write with my quill. I need to find out who supplies Lily with so called drugs. I am a lawsuit fiend. Odd lads wear unusual pants. You better listen people, I’m talking now! I don’t like you! Take that brutal honesty. You swim freely in the vast waters and ocean trenches. Don’t die little fishies! Don’t be a sissy man! There are girls watching! Learn to spell! I am not saying her name out loud! Peeves, when you cry, I cry. I got my period once.

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 12:39
Chapter: Unwell

“You don’t give Voldemort the ol’ one-two

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 10:22
Chapter: Anything But Ordinary

“So what do you say, Myrtle?” Sirius asked.

“I say you’re full of waffle,” Moaning Myrtle said, diving into the toilet

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 10:12
Chapter: Soar

James sat, thinking. If it hadn’t been for him, no one would be in this mess.

just like harry

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 10:08
Chapter: I'll Be

The strands in your eyes that color them wonderful
Stop me and steal my breath
Emeralds from mountains thrust toward the sky
Never revealing their depth
Tell me that we belong together
Dress it up with the trappings of love
I'll be captivated
I'll hang from your lips
Instead of the gallows of heartache that hang from above

I'll be your crying shoulder
I'll be love suicide
I'll be better when I'm older
I'll be the greatest fan of your life

“I wouldn’t know, not all of mine have come true,” he said, looking into her crystal like eyes.

“What do you mean?” she asked.

“I want you,” he said. He leaned in and brushed his lips across hers

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/26/11 9:48
Chapter: Behind These Hazel Eyes

Seems like just yesterday
You were a part of me
I used to stand so tall
I used to be so strong
Your arms around me tight
Everything, it felt so right
Unbreakable, like nothing could go wrong
Now I can't breathe
No, I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Here I am, once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it, can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up, deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/24/11 21:33
Chapter: She Contemplates

yeah !!!!!!!!! hilariors and just a perfect lily this is exactly what i have been searching for i love how she describes his appearance haha great!!!!! 

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Diadem
Date: 07/24/11 9:32
Chapter: Oleander

Personally, I don't think Sirius would write a book. He barely reads, so why would he write?

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Diadem
Date: 07/24/11 8:50
Chapter: A Train Off Tracks

Oooooh..... Intriguing. this story is good, but I have to agree with you that the first two chapters were boring, but it's definitely more exciting now. Good Job!!!

Reviewer: firebirdjinx
Date: 03/06/11 14:43
Chapter: The Noble Fight

'Lily shouted. "Up! Up! Up!"'

It's funny, witty, and AWESOME!

Reviewer: nevillesgirl28
Date: 03/03/11 18:41
Chapter: Welcome to My Life

"Way with women, my ass!" James sai as he saw Siriu standing outside the doorway.
"They kicked me out, man!" Sirius said.

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 12/29/10 17:11
Chapter: Head Over Feet

love this story!!! so good!

Reviewer: Sailing Girl
Date: 12/03/10 12:43
Chapter: Perfect

Don’t you mean Sirius-ly?

Do you want me to Sirius-ly hurt you?

Lol, so good ;)

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/03/10 3:39
Chapter: Good Riddance

1. Probably Sirius as he was in a lot of it, made hilarious jokes and you loved him the most.
2. Addison
3. I'm not sure.. all of them really! Each chapter was amazing, but the chapters where Lily and James were together were the best.
4. Holy crap, too many to name! Most of Sirius' lines xD
5. Not sure, both L/J and S/A!
6. Everything in the prequel. Is it written yet?
7. Uhm.. no. I think Peter Pettigrew needed to be there more. Like her was one of the Marauders, he should have been mentioned a couple more times.
8. Uhm, probably the star jumps (can't remember what you call them, jumping jacks?) on the roof. That was hilarious! OR TURNING INTO A GIRL! His little story was funny too :D Uhm and the trampoline LOL.
9. Nope, I will when I get time to though (: Actually, I've read Solace. I like that one more that this one btw... I think. Udate any time soon?

Loved it, x

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/03/10 3:01
Chapter: Here By Me

Stupid, stupid MoM!

And stupid, stupid Peter, that's how Voldemort know where they were. GAH!


Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/03/10 2:49
Chapter: I'll Be There For You

I don't like cats either.

Kittens are okay, but cats *shudders*

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/03/10 0:11
Chapter: Naked


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