Reviews For Potter's Charm
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 6:55
Chapter: Somebody Told Me

Yay everyone's gonna be happy!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 6:38
Chapter: Parts Undone

Just flow with the motion of the ocean, babe.
Absolutely Brilliant! See this is why I love Sirius, he's just so dang hallarious! :D
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 6:19
Chapter: Just Missed the Train

Ok, that was kinda confusing. But uh... Ok
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 6:11
Chapter: Three's Company

It was funny.
I think I've decided Sirius is my favourite character in this little story! :)
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 6:04
Chapter: Only One

That was very short!
But it's ok because the previous chapters make up for it! :) (giggles)
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 5:57
Chapter: Head Over Feet

Poor Lily!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 5:43
Chapter: Just A Girl

Again, Sirius is soooooooooooooooooooo funny!
I laughed soo hard when he cut himself! I had to put down my IPod so I could calm myself down from all the laughing!
More funny ones please!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 5:21
Chapter: Girls Just Want To Have Fun

Sirius is soooooo funny!!!!
I could not stop laughing!......I'm still laughing!
This one is defiantly my favorite so far!!!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:58
Chapter: Forgotten

I liked the part when Addison was like:

"I swear, all you Mauraduers are gay."

I died from laughter when I read that!
Keep up the great work!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:45
Chapter: She Will Be Loved

You're good at doing all the little details like in this chapter and in the previous chapter, bit then the chapters end up being really small.
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:35
Chapter: She Contemplates

Wow that was a really short chapter!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:34
Chapter: Are You Happy Now?

Wow that was a really short chapter!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:26
Chapter: You Think You Know Me

That's funny how much you emphasised never.
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:14
Chapter: Oleander

I would love to have my own room personalized for me like that!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 4:00
Chapter: The Feast

Short chapters
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 3:48
Chapter: The Noble Fight

Good dueling scene
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 3:37
Chapter: She Contemplates

Does them being on the train have anything to do with the prophecy?
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/14/11 3:03
Chapter: She Contemplates

I think it was really good!
Great start to the story
-Livie

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 10/18/11 23:32
Chapter: Unwell

I don't really like how Addy and Mac and Maimee are just ......... gone.

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 10/18/11 22:04
Chapter: I Don't Wanna Be

Fave quote:

He cupped her face in his hands and brought his lips to hers. And there, they had one of their first real kisses, alone on the beach when the sun was setting. As Sirius would say, ‘How sweet, but totally clichéd’.Actually, he would most likely say something along the lines of,'Addy babe, that could be you and me'. Yet, nothing really mattered to them at that moment other than being themselves.

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