Are you really going to do a prequel.?? If you are, I would like to see sexual situations, detailed.
1) Sirius would have to be my favorite, because he is just the comedy relief.
2) Addison
3) Naked
4)“So, when you and Prongs decide to have a baby, remember my name,” Sirius exclaimed. “Sirius is an absolutely beautiful name for a baby.”
“What if we have a girl?” Lily teased.
“Siriella,” Sirius dictated in an obvious voice.
5) Lily and James
6) nothing that I know of
7) I think that you could have held off a little bit on getting L&J together but it was good all the same.
8)become a girl
9) I belive I have read most of your stories but just to make sure I'll read them all again.
VERY NICE!!yey!!!!lily/james r together!!!so sweet!
1-Sirius of course!
2-Addison(How could you kill her??!)
3-The ones where Sirius is a girl
4-So many i cant choose!
5- Sirius/Addison
6-Theres a prequel? i must go find it!
7-Killing Remus' and Sirius' loves
8-That book was freaky in how it kinda made sense.
9-Yep I remember the name but i've forgotten which story
OMG HOW COULD YOU??!!!
Waaah Addison and Sirius were like the best couple ever. *stomps about angrily*
Anyway now i'm over that (not really) i really enjoyed the emotion that was in this chapter. It brought tears to my eyes!
hah i loved it!
My favourite quote was
“Ok Lily. I only have a three, a six, and a lady card. You can go fishing,” James said proudly.
I'm really enjoying this fanfiction. Your writing is so fresh and entertaining. I've read another one of your fanfictions but i've forgotten which one. Since i remember your name it must have been good too.
Just read the first two chapters and i must say i enjoy your writing style!
AWESOME FIC! i know i am only just reviewing bu hey better late than never.
1. Sirius was definately my favourite.
2. Addison, sad she died though.
3. 11, girls just wanna have fun
-this chapter had me laughing so hard.-
4. “Sirius, you have your-you have your-” Addison said, laughing again.
“WHAT? I HAVE MY WHAT?” he asked.
“You have your period,” she said, still laughing.
“I HAVE MY WHAT????” Sirius asked, clearly appalled.
“Oh my god,” he said to himself.
“This sleepover has proven to be something very special,” Addison said.
5. L/J made a good couple. S/A came close though =)
6. hmmm, i dunno, more lunacy from Sirius?
7. nope=)
8. Jumping Jack jamboree xD
9. Yes i have you are now one of my favourite authors =)
oh my good i HATE maimee!!!poor lily!:(
ugh i hate this momentss...
im gonna keep reading because you are an amazing writter and i hate stoping in the middle of stories... but seriously come on! JKR said that the atacks of the death eaters only started whern james and lily got maried... and that is afterr they finished hogwarts.. so cant they have a picture perfect year?
anyway... you are an amazing writter :)
i love chapters like this... i prefer them over the scary death eaters ones...
hahaha LMAO!!
“So, I say Goldfish?” James asked.
“No! Go fish,” Lily said.
“Ok Lily. I only have a three, a six, and a lady card. You can go fishing,” James said proudly.
“James, you don’t tell me what you have! And the lady on the card? It’s called a queen," Lily said, pointing to it.
“So that’s what the Q is for?” James asked.
dun dun dun...
like the tragic twist ;)
1) Sirius
2)Addison and Mac
3)I LOVED them all
4)"I am in love. A first for me. Love. True breathtaking love. True stomach turning love. Butterfly striken love. I am absolutly crazy for this boy. How has he done it?"
5)L/J & S/A
6)more crazy sirius moments i loved those
7)nope it was all like the perfect story
8)ohhh... ummm Taking first years onto the roof, illegal martial arts club, and cat loveres annonomos (sorry can't spell at the moment)
9)YES Lily and james and their story of love was AMAZING AS WAS THE SEQUEL
right now i think that you are a cold and heartless person for killing off addy and maimee. i sort of want to strangle you (sorry). i will refrain myself though.
i do have a question. the song for this chapter. who is it by?!!?! i know the lyrics and its just annoying me that i cant remember.
1)Sirius (always so funny!)
2)Addison
3)Chapter 40- Who Knows
4)"'My Experience As A Girl
Written by the Pouncing Padfoot
My life is like watermelon. I don’t have to use ink to write with my quill. I need to find out who supplies Lily with so called drugs. I am a lawsuit fiend. Odd lads wear unusual pants. You better listen people, I’m talking now! I don’t like you! Take that brutal honesty. You swim freely in the vast waters and ocean trenches. Don’t die little fishies! Don’t be a sissy man! There are girls watching! Learn to spell! I am not saying her name out loud! Peeves, when you cry, I cry. I got my period once.'” (I laughed so hard I cried)
5)S/A (Sirius ALWAYS loses the one he loves)
6)Trampolines (need I say more?)
7)Addy dying (I always feel so bad for Sirius, constantly losing the one he loves)
8)Jumping Jack Jamboree
9)Yes
I loved this story!!! life out of Hogwarts Stories are always so weird. Good luck!!!
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (ex. James, Lily, Sirius, Remus..etc.)
Sirius
2) Who was your favorite OC? (ex. Addison, Maimee, Mac?)
Addison
3) What was your favorite chapter?
Miami
4) What was your favorite quote from this story? (GO DIGGING PEOPLE!)
“So, when you and Prongs decide to have a baby, remember my name,” Sirius exclaimed. “Sirius is an absolutely beautiful name for a baby.”
“What if we have a girl?” Lily teased.
“Siriella,” Sirius dictated in an obvious voice.
5) Who was your favorite couple? (L/J, S/A, R/M)
S/a
6) Anything you’d like to see in the prequel?
lots of sirius
7) Is there anything you didn’t like story related? not really
8) What was the craziest thing Sirius did in this fic? jumping jacks on the roof...defintiely
9) Have you read my other stories?yea...loved them all
luv ur story great opening
