Reviews For Potter's Charm
Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:56
Chapter: Head Over Feet

In fifty years she'll be babysitting his kids and they will be a seventy year old trophy couple? Honestly..
Very dramatic chapter. Maybe Sirius isn't the only one visited by their Aunt....

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:49
Chapter: Just A Girl

I have a can of it in my room, but I'm terrified to use it because apparently it burns. ERG! Maybe tonight I'll try it...

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:39
Chapter: Girls Just Want To Have Fun

Actually, I'm quite easy.
BAhahaha. that was good.
OK. You make thosestupid girls VERY stupid and unimpressive characters.
Okay, that was amazing. The sleepover. The period thing was gross, but everything else was freaking hysterical

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:23
Chapter: Forgotten

OWWWWWHHHH.... *bats eyelashes* do they get together or don't they, you can tell me!
*laughs maniacly and braces for the impact of the eye roll* ^Oooof!^ Hey, that hurt!

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:16
Chapter: She Will Be Loved

The very last sentence....was entirely too corny. It wouldn't even mean anything at all without the song. It sounds like James is a freaking stalker or something.Like Cole. SHEEESh

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 19:06
Chapter: Are You Happy Now?

She really is quite perplexed.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 18:57
Chapter: You Think You Know Me

hahahahahahahahahaha. I expected that.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 18:48
Chapter: Oleander

Freaking cool. Its like I'm rereading your last story, which I loved, and finding all sorts of stuff I didn't see before.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 18:20
Chapter: The Noble Fight

This is a cooler beginning than 'Lily and James'

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 18:13
Chapter: A Train Off Tracks

Lily seems pretty darn wishy washy in your stories. How bout you have her man up?

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 18:06
Chapter: He's Infatuated

Oh, its starting all over again. YAAAYYY!
I will miss the Halle-Sirius and Katy-Lupin stuff, though.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 17:58
Chapter: She Contemplates

*sniff* I miss Halle and Katy.

Reviewer: lullabye
Date: 11/14/07 15:16
Chapter: Girls Just Want To Have Fun

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg omg!!! So funny!!! HAHA! can't stop laughing!!! Sirius and Remus as girls!!!! HAHAHA!!!! Hilarious!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/06/07 12:28
Chapter: Good Riddance

1. mine is James,Lily,Remus,and Sirius
2.Addison and Maimee, i was so sad when they died.
3. I loved all the chapters, i liked the white house alot,when they all happened to be in the same house for the summer.
4.I loved pretty much everything Sirius said.
5. L/J and S/A
6.I wanst to see when lily and james get married.
7.i liked the whole thing really. I just thought Snape was alitte ooc
8.when he was a girl and was all perverted with the girl i thought that was hilarious and when he got his period..., i haven't read anyother of your stories, but i loved this one so i will positivly love the others.

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/06/07 11:52
Chapter: Because I Can

You kinda got the Snape character wrong, he would never call her a mudblood again and wouldn't be all mean to her. Because he loves her. Like it said in Deathly Hallows Severus loved Lily and when someone called someone a mudblood he starting yelling and stuff. So Snape's no a really bad person and does like Lily.

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/06/07 11:21
Chapter: I'll Be There For You

Sirius is an idiot- "Do you like cats" is he mental!!!

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/05/07 22:37
Chapter: Who Knows?

lol, Sirius is insane

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/05/07 19:42
Chapter: Broken

*still crying*

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/05/07 19:36
Chapter: Slipped Away

It's so sad. WHY DID YOU KILL ADDISON. *crying* i'm actually crying. SIRUS!!!

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/05/07 19:24
Chapter: You Found Me

oh no!!!!!

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