Reviews For Potter's Charm
Reviewer: Daisy Blue
Date: 03/29/08 1:17
Chapter: She Contemplates

The first chapter is a great start. My first impression is that this could possibly be better than james and lily: the story of their love.

Reviewer: clovergirl
Date: 03/27/08 19:48
Chapter: Good Riddance

1) soooo Lily. she rox my sox!
2) Addison
3) there are so many... i can't choose!
4) ditto
5) Lily/James by far
6) 'prequel'? I just want to read it!
7)not really. I didn't like Addison dying, but I get WHY it happened
8) let's see... checking out his arse, starting a martial arts/spiritual yoga club... need I go on?
This is great! Sirius made me fall out of my chair laughing a few times! Actually a lot of times, but still....

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 03/27/08 17:21
Chapter: She Contemplates

Great story- of course i nearly cried myself sick when the mickinnons died! That was so terrible- of course, in the world of Harry Potter, anyone can die so I guess I shouldn't complain. It was pretty good anyway.

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 03/11/08 20:06
Chapter: She Will Be Loved

hello??? thats two short chapters in a row! please make them longer

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 03/11/08 17:27
Chapter: He's Infatuated

its really good not boring

Reviewer: Dan Fan
Date: 03/05/08 7:16
Chapter: Welcome to My Life

I have read this far? AND IT IS BLOODY AWESOME

Reviewer: stagmarauder
Date: 03/03/08 7:05
Chapter: I Don't Wanna Miss A Thing


Reviewer: stagmarauder
Date: 03/02/08 14:55
Chapter: Anything But Ordinary

"Oi!" Peeves."

Reviewer: stagmarauder
Date: 03/02/08 13:21
Chapter: White Houses

"I'm feeling spontaneous right now."

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 02/09/08 17:34
Chapter: The Feast

Poor Mac.

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 02/09/08 17:20
Chapter: She Contemplates

Pretty good!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/09/08 8:37
Chapter: I Won't Worry

“Sirius giving mouth to mouth to his broomstick does not count as a cat sucking someone’s eyes out,” Lily muttered.

“It could have happened,” James mumbled, turning rather red.
“I joined, Cat Lovers Anonymous,” Sirius squealed.
“I am Bob Bronchif,” Bob said. “I am the Half Blood Prince.”

“And I’m Merlin’s personal masseuse,” Sirius called, walking down the hall away from Bob.

"YAY!!!!!" Exclaimed a very happy Minna Black.

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/09/08 8:28
Chapter: Naked

“I love you so much,” Lily said. “I don’t know if I could handle doing jumping jacks on the roof of the school, so don’t go anywhere.”

“I don’t intend to,” James grinned, wrapping her into a kiss.
AWWW how cute and cudly but my favorite is......I think we shouldn’t be so worried. It’s not as if Sirius hasn’t done weird things like this before,” Lily reflected. “We should let him carry on with it. It’s not as if it’s dangerous.”

“Sirius Black, that is dangerous!” Lily bellowed.

Sirius was leading a pack of first years on the roof of Hogwarts.

“Now, don’t listen to her, young ones,” Sirius advised. “She’s just a mean girl who has no sense of mischief.”

“She’s the Head Girl,” one of the first years pointed out.

“And where has that taken her?” Sirius asked. “Anyone? Anyone know where it has taken her? She isn’t the one on the roof of Hogwarts, is she? No, she’s yelling at us. Now, if anyone wants to be the one yelling, leave now.”

None of the first years dared speak. Some of the younger girls were swooning at the sight of Sirius Black. They were obviously on the waiting list to join the Sirius Black Fan Club.

“That’s what I want to hear,” Sirius gleefully squealed, seeing no objections to his latest dangerous escapade.

“Mr. Black?” one of the first years asked.

“Yes, young man,” Sirius voiced with great authority.

“What are we doing up here?” the child asked.

“We are daring to bend all rules set down by our forefathers. We are going to be put down in the books as the first ones to do jumping jacks upon the roof of Hogwarts,” Sirius explained.

“Sirius Black, I’m getting McGonagall if you don’t levitate those children down here,” Lily screamed.

“She is such a spoilsport,” Sirius muttered.

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/09/08 8:22
Chapter: Who Knows?


Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/07/08 18:30
Chapter: Slipped Away

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sob* they were finally all happy and THEN HALF OF THEM DIED!!!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/07/08 18:17
Chapter: Groovy Guy

My fav quote so far would have2 b “Addison, that is a remarkable camouflage of clothing you are wearing today.”

Sirius’ voice could be heard outside the Great Hall.

“You daft lunatic, those words don’t make sense!” she bellowed.

Everyone in the Great Hall collapsed in laughter.
Because thats basically what happens 2 me and my friends every day. Were all mentally insane, demented, and bonkers! WhHHEEEeE for Instantaniaclosticnonarexixphobic people!
i actaully have no idea what that means....

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/06/08 16:17
Chapter: Welcome to My Life

My fav from this cappie probably"It's hell being your sister sometimes" because I'm a twin and that's exactly how I feel

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/06/08 15:40
Chapter: Unreachable

aaawwww(yes again with the awws)wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/05/08 20:22
Chapter: Somebody Told Me


Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/05/08 20:02
Chapter: Just A Girl

Do you know that Durmstrang is an ALL BOYS SCHOOL?! Other wise...I really like it.

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