I loved chapter 11--so funny.
4.too hard to choose...x_x
im going to be completly honest... it was kinda boring im srry!!!!!!!!!!! dont hate me!!!! i will deffiently read on though! im so srry i was so harsh!
i really like the direction this story is going!
I repeat, teenagers are not real people.
Teenagers are not real people
And all because male and female think and react differently to the same stuff. Just say what you mean and to h.... with what other people think. It would make life much simpler.
She just doesn't ever want to admit he might have been right about Snape.
Being a prefect might not be so bad.
And why were the Death Eaters looking for James? Did I ask this already? Sirius hasn't started growing up yet.
I am most curious as to why they mentioned James by name. Obviously there is something going on we'll find out about sometime soon.
Who are they after? One of the Marauder's?
I definitely plan on sticking around. I like what you've done in the first two chapters, and they're not necessarily slow, just setting the scene for the rest.
Reads like a good start to me.
Loved it so much!
1.Sirius was so funny in this fic! Loved him so much. I love Lily, James, and Remus too though!
2. Addison, she was SOOOO funny!
3. The two where Sirus and Remus turn into girls. That was soooo funny, you had me in hysterics! Addy was hysterical in those chapters, so was Remus.
4. Way to many to choose from.
5.I love my Lily and James, but Sirius and Addy were the best!
6. Lots of Addy and Sirius.
7. I can not believe you killed Addy! Bad Bad Bad!!!
8. The Jumping Jack Jamborie.
9. Yes, they're amazing.
-LOVED ENTIRE GIRLS SLEEPOVER!
-Loved Sirius and his trampoline!
-Loved Miami vacation, minus death eaters of course.
-Loved Team Lily/James!
This is the saddest thing I have ever read. Even now on my third time reading this story, it still gets me. The last line is heartbreaking . Addy is probobly my favourite OC ever, and her and sirius were perfect.
that was a short chapter
my favorite quote is just flow with the motion of the ocean, babe :]
hi! well for the start I think that Siruis, the way you make him be, was awesome, excellent work really my favorite character. he became like someone I actually know, well I wish I knew.
As i said I loved what you made of Siruis, but the thing is that this fic it's suppossed to be J/L and at the beggining it worked great but then, once they got togheter it seemed like they were the background story. I think that you should've go deeper on their relathionsip.
But the other charachters love them, as well as the humor part really intelligent and full of sarcasm.
well Good bye andgood luck. adios