Reviews For Potter's Charm
Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 16:04
Chapter: Oleander

:D

Lily's starting to see the true James Potter (:

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 15:56
Chapter: The Feast

reviewed :P

sorry, racing on to the next chapter!

x

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 15:49
Chapter: The Noble Fight

"Alive had a bright burn across her forehead"

Supposed to be Alice?

x

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 15:43
Chapter: A Train Off Tracks

o.o"

I would have sworn i'd have read the first part before, but not the second. This is really weird. Haha. Why the hell are they on the train?!

x

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 15:36
Chapter: He's Infatuated

Lool, I feel as if i've read this chapter before. It's weird!

Reviewer: ashleighhlovesharrypotter
Date: 12/02/10 15:22
Chapter: She Contemplates

(:

Reviewer: Sailing Girl
Date: 11/30/10 12:44
Chapter: Welcome to My Life

“Wow, you’re smart Sirius. I never would have guessed,” James said.

“It’s a gift I hide for the sake of my Marauder reputation,” Sirius said.

Love the story ;)

Reviewer: EricaMarie
Date: 09/02/10 0:39
Chapter: Good Riddance

this has been my favorite fanfiction to read! i laughed so much, Sirius just really lightened the mood. great job!

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 07/15/10 1:46
Chapter: Good Riddance

OMG!!!! this is one of the best storys i have ever read!! you did great. i want to take time to answer your questions 1.sirius 2.addison 3. chapter eleven, girls just wanna have fun 4. “Lily Evans is my new hero,” Sirius said. “Can I touch it?”

“You can do whatever you want with it, within reason,” Lily said, adding the last bit just to be safe.

Sirius stroked the edges before climbing on. He slowly jumped, testing the feel.

Before they could say trampoline, Sirius was jumping like a maniac.

“James, if you ever dump her, so help me god I will strangle you in your sleep,” Sirius screamed, laughing and jumping. “I’m king of the world! Go Sirius, go Sirius!” 5. sirius and addison are my fav couple. 6. umm idk. 7. well the fact that people died but you know that has to happen. 8. i would say the craziest thing would be the trampaline or becoming a girl. 9. i have read some of your other stories.

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/14/10 18:20
Chapter: Good Riddance

1) SIRIUS BABYYY!!!!! ^^ haha
2)Mac hah she was awesome in an odd way... :)
3) uhmmmm I don't remember the number but the ones where Sirius (thts meeee!... But in guy form...) wrote a book and did jumping jacks on the roof!
4) “James, if you ever dump her, so help me god I will strangle you in your sleep,” Sirius screamed, laughing and jumping. “I’m king of the world! Go Sirius, go Sirius!”
5) S/A
6) ahh I dunno more Sirius randomess or some marauder mayhem. :)
7) there wasn't a random end of school prank... :(
8) wow there are so many... Umm probably signing up for the cat club... Nonono talking to voldie about cats. :D haha
9) yeahhhhhh i was planning on reading them soon. :)
10) GO PADFOOT!!!!! :) Secret Lily your story is great... This is the only story on MNFF that made me tear up... You should be ashamed... KIDDING! I loved this story TONS. :) like

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/13/10 19:53
Chapter: Naked

SCORE! My own fan club with ickle firsties recruiting!!
~Sirius

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/10/10 22:14
Chapter: Broken

STOP MAKING ME CRY!!!
Yours truly,
Padfoot.

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/10/10 21:35
Chapter: You Found Me

You made me cry. Sirius-ly.
~ 2nd gen padfoot (seeing as I'm already crying up there ^ I'm being my second self. OMGGG THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER IM GONNA DIEEEEE!

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/10/10 21:19
Chapter: Groovy Guy

“Addison, that is a remarkable camouflage of clothing you are wearing today.”

Sirius’ voice could be heard outside the Great Hall.

“You daft lunatic, those words don’t make sense!” she bellowed.

Everyone in the Great Hall collapsed in laughter.

~~ except the slytherins for they have a minimal ammount of enjoyment for humerous things as they are great blundering gits.

Sincerely,
Sirius Black.

Reviewer: 2nd_Generation_Padfoot
Date: 07/10/10 21:19
Chapter: Groovy Guy

“Addison, that is a remarkable camouflage of clothing you are wearing today.”

Sirius’ voice could be heard outside the Great Hall.

“You daft lunatic, those words don’t make sense!” she bellowed.

Everyone in the Great Hall collapsed in laughter.

~~ except the slytherins for they have a minimal ammount of enjoyment for humerous things as they are great blundering gits.

Sincerely,
Sirius Black.

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 05/11/10 16:46
Chapter: Good Riddance

1. I love ALL the characters.
2. My fave OC was definitely Addison
3. I loved ALL the chapters.
4. Fave quote? I liked them ALL
5. I liked all the couples.... Do I really have to choose??
6. There's going to be a PREQUEL?? OMG!
7. Nah. I loved the whole story
8. I think the craziest thing was the Jumping Jack Jamboree thing. LOL
9. Yes! I HAVE read some of your other stories!!

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 04/11/10 21:04
Chapter: Good Riddance

1. Sirius ALL THE WAY!!!! :) I cried when Addison died because of the sadness he felt!
2.Addison (CRIED :(( )
3.I liked when Sirius was a girl (HILARIOUS)
4.The note to sirius by Addison
5. S/A
6. Your making a prequel?! :)
7. Hm.... I wanted to see more Afterward Marauders
8. Him being a girl... the trampoline.. the cat club... the roof... TOO MANY TO COUNT!!
9.Not yet, will soon!

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 04/11/10 19:11
Chapter: Naked

OMG THERE IS A SBFC?!?!?!?!!

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 04/11/10 18:38
Chapter: Slipped Away

Why cant i stop crying???

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 04/11/10 15:16
Chapter: She Will Be Loved

My heart cries for James potter

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