Reviews For The Pawn
Reviewer: LalyW
Date: 07/13/06 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 2

It was one of the best stories I've read.Very convincing and logical.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 03/02/06 22:32
Chapter: The Pawn

This is what all fanfiction should be like. Honestly, I thought it was nearly worthy of JKR. I hope this is how she planned it because now I am probably going to think about Book 7 according to this idea. This is the best Snape- theory I've seen, and it only works as a really well-done fanfic, not an editorial really. And it could be true, and Snape could have gone back to Voldemort later by Book 6, which explains what he did there. Though I haven't read chapter two yet, so maybe not. By the way, I never reviewed without reading the whole story b4, but this was so excellent I decided to. Also, the next chapter has a higher rating so i'm not sure if I want to read it. I might start, but I won't read all of it if it is too disturbing. Anyhow, very good job. 10.

Reviewer: SmokingThatBomb
Date: 01/29/06 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 2

Wow... this is something I would expect to read in the next book, this is JK material. This is great, accurate; so it seems. All seeems like the things that Albus/Severus would say or do. Nothing overboard. Just right. Nice job!

Reviewer: dumbledores_grl
Date: 01/07/06 18:40
Chapter: The Pawn

Wow. This was such a great fanfic! I love it because it shows Dumbledore and Snape in ways that you never had thought of before. Though I'm not a huge fan of Snape, sorry, this story is pretty much the only fanfic that has ever made me almost believe that there is more to Snape. This is definitley on my favorites list! Great writing! 10/10!

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 01/04/06 18:05
Chapter: The Pawn

wow that was awesome!!!10/10

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 12/01/05 19:52
Chapter: The Pawn

Wonderful, wonderful job! Bravo! 10/10!

Reviewer: darrena
Date: 09/01/05 14:46
Chapter: The Pawn

Wow!!!This is great!!! I really like your story...and it fits so well with the rest of HP. I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ProngsPrincessLexi
Date: 08/15/05 11:45
Chapter: The Pawn

That was absolutely amazing! Truly powerful. I got very drawn into the way that Severus and Dumbledore were feeling throughout, this could easily have been the true course of events. The characterizations was perfect. The olny concrit I would have would be... at the end, when Dumbledore is thinking, he mentions Lily, but leaves James out. I think that he would spare thought to both of them.. just my opinion. This is going on my favourites and I will be sure to recommend it to others. The best fic I have read since HBP, perfectly paced and ending with exactly the right amount covered and left to the imagination. Well done! Please check out my stories if you have time!

Reviewer: Youth
Date: 07/28/05 0:25
Chapter: The Pawn

I like it! That was powerful! 10/10!

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