Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 02/04/07 13:57
Chapter: Explanations

i like it! it is funny that both james and remus can tell it isnt her handwriting, but sirius cant!
write more please!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/22/06 14:26
Chapter: Explanations

James is so smart - ofcourse he knows Lily's handwriting. Cute. Waiting for more.UPDATE fast!!!!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/22/06 14:21
Chapter: The Letter

Please don't do this to James - and to me.And anyway Sirius doesn't have blue eyes so you CAN"T make him Lily's blue-eyed boy! You write really well. Nice crisp dialogue!

Reviewer: faithful1
Date: 03/12/06 20:19
Chapter: Explanations

Gosh! This is really good so far- I was scared for a second- I was like, "NO! YOU CAN'T WRITE A LOVE TRIANGLE BETWEEN LILY-JAMES-AND-SIRIUS!" And then when the second chappie appeared, I was like...Thank God... But you better explain why Narcissa did so in the next chapter or I might commit suicide from that deathly cliffhanger.

Reviewer: TinTin
Date: 11/15/05 10:31
Chapter: Explanations

phew! I'm glad that it didn't turn out as a love triangle after all. Thanks for that. :D I really like this. It's really awesome.

Author's Response: Your welcome. I hate James - Lily - Sirius love triangles too.

Reviewer: JamesandLilyforever
Date: 10/01/05 10:25
Chapter: The Letter

OMG!!! its great, so good with the story line, and the O.C. well it doesn't matter because thats the greatest show. !~*JamesandLilyForever*~!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: Hermione_Potter01
Date: 09/05/05 3:47
Chapter: The Letter

OMG!!!I LOVE THIS FIC,PLEASE WRITE MORE.I'M BEGGING YOU.This story ROCKS, and you know it, so please update it soon!.!.!.!

Reviewer: SiriuslyaMarauder
Date: 09/04/05 15:16
Chapter: The Letter

ahh!! awesome story!! keep wrotign and update soon!!! i loved the letter Lily sent Sirius, s she trying to get James to stop liking her if he thinks she likes Sirius???

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 08/31/05 9:22
Chapter: The Letter

*read lily's letter to sirius, faint, get up and start typing* Brilliant! when is the nextchapter up?

Author's Response: right now

Reviewer: evil_fairy
Date: 08/25/05 18:38
Chapter: The Letter

Wow I really liked that!! Please update as soon as possible!!

Reviewer: chabe
Date: 08/20/05 15:46
Chapter: The Letter

WOW!! Your fic is really amazing!!! I think that Lily didn't send that letter to Sirius, I personally think it was Snape...but the fic is really fine!!! Continue it soon!!! ;)

Reviewer: Hermione_Potter01
Date: 08/19/05 18:55
Chapter: The Letter

I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE! Please write more soon!!!!Please, I'm begging you!!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: hermione09x
Date: 08/19/05 10:29
Chapter: The Letter

fabulous!! i really enjoyed that! I love the cliffhanger but i swear i cant wait for an update! lol could you pretty pretty please email me when you update? at *begs* well its fine if you cant, it would be easier for me to get back to the story though since i rarely remember to come back lol thats just me.. well i loved the way lily actually declared her love for SIRIUS!!! that was awesome, i cant wait to see james find out!! lol

Reviewer: Vikki
Date: 08/19/05 9:09
Chapter: The Letter

Great beginning. Did lily swallow a love potion or something?

Author's Response: No I can assure you she didn't.

Reviewer: The Grey Lady
Date: 08/19/05 6:40
Chapter: The Letter

Wow! I love it! Please update soon!!!! I like the way you started out in the summer, not in school, and I loooove Lily's letter. Somehow I get the feeling she sent it just for James to get over her, or something.

Reviewer: Sparky Nut
Date: 08/18/05 20:20
Chapter: The Letter

vair vair interesting! you've got my attention

Reviewer: hpfreak91
Date: 08/14/05 7:22
Chapter: The Letter

oh just one more thing, can you please email me at when you get the next chappie up. PLEASE? this is me begging.

Reviewer: hpfreak91
Date: 08/14/05 7:21
Chapter: The Letter

WOW, I really like it. It's really good. Hmmm, I never thought that Lily would like Sirius, and I still don't really think that but you seem to be writing it well, so IT'S WORKING COZ I WANT MORE!!! :) looking forward to next update.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 08/02/05 14:29
Chapter: The Letter

Yep, you've definitely left us on a cliff-hanger. At a cliff-hanger. Anyway, the only problem I have with it (I mentioned it when I betaed) is Sirius' middle name. Otherwise, I'm enjoying it (obviously) and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: luvthe1uhurt
Date: 07/31/05 12:21
Chapter: The Letter

hey, i luvd ur story!!wikid intro 2 the fic n i smell a mystery afoot!wats goin on wiv sirius nd his family(and uncles)??and why is lily sudenly in love with james' best mate?cant wait till the next chappy!

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