i like it! it is funny that both james and remus can tell it isnt her handwriting, but sirius cant!
write more please!
James is so smart - ofcourse he knows Lily's handwriting. Cute. Waiting for more.UPDATE fast!!!!
Please don't do this to James - and to me.And anyway Sirius doesn't have blue eyes so you CAN"T make him Lily's blue-eyed boy! You write really well. Nice crisp dialogue!
Gosh! This is really good so far- I was scared for a second- I was like, "NO! YOU CAN'T WRITE A LOVE TRIANGLE BETWEEN LILY-JAMES-AND-SIRIUS!" And then when the second chappie appeared, I was like...Thank God... But you better explain why Narcissa did so in the next chapter or I might commit suicide from that deathly cliffhanger.
phew! I'm glad that it didn't turn out as a love triangle after all. Thanks for that. :D I really like this. It's really awesome.
Author's Response: Your welcome. I hate James - Lily - Sirius love triangles too.
OMG!!! its great, so good with the story line, and the O.C. well it doesn't matter because thats the greatest show. !~*JamesandLilyForever*~!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it
OMG!!!I LOVE THIS FIC,PLEASE WRITE MORE.I'M BEGGING YOU.This story ROCKS, and you know it, so please update it soon!.!.!.!
ahh!! awesome story!! keep wrotign and update soon!!! i loved the letter Lily sent Sirius, s she trying to get James to stop liking her if he thinks she likes Sirius???
*read lily's letter to sirius, faint, get up and start typing* Brilliant! when is the nextchapter up?
Author's Response: right now
Wow I really liked that!! Please update as soon as possible!!
WOW!! Your fic is really amazing!!! I think that Lily didn't send that letter to Sirius, I personally think it was Snape...but the fic is really fine!!! Continue it soon!!! ;)
I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE! Please write more soon!!!!Please, I'm begging you!!?!?!?!?!
fabulous!! i really enjoyed that! I love the cliffhanger but i swear i cant wait for an update! lol could you pretty pretty please email me when you update? at firstname.lastname@example.org? *begs* well its fine if you cant, it would be easier for me to get back to the story though since i rarely remember to come back lol thats just me.. well i loved the way lily actually declared her love for SIRIUS!!! that was awesome, i cant wait to see james find out!! lol
Great beginning. Did lily swallow a love potion or something?
Author's Response: No I can assure you she didn't.
Wow! I love it! Please update soon!!!! I like the way you started out in the summer, not in school, and I loooove Lily's letter. Somehow I get the feeling she sent it just for James to get over her, or something.
vair vair interesting! you've got my attention
oh just one more thing, can you please email me at email@example.com when you get the next chappie up. PLEASE? this is me begging.
WOW, I really like it. It's really good. Hmmm, I never thought that Lily would like Sirius, and I still don't really think that but you seem to be writing it well, so IT'S WORKING COZ I WANT MORE!!! :) looking forward to next update.
Yep, you've definitely left us on a cliff-hanger. At a cliff-hanger. Anyway, the only problem I have with it (I mentioned it when I betaed) is Sirius' middle name. Otherwise, I'm enjoying it (obviously) and I can't wait for the next chapter.
hey, i luvd ur story!!wikid intro 2 the fic n i smell a mystery afoot!wats goin on wiv sirius nd his family(and uncles)??and why is lily sudenly in love with james' best mate?cant wait till the next chappy!