Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/18/06 12:16
Chapter: Chapter Two - Birthday Surprise

I love this! When will he notice the locket? AHHHHH! I will keep reading, now.

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/18/06 12:13
Chapter: Chapter One - Reflections

I like this story...my friend has been trying to get me to read it for a while, so I thought I would. Normally, I'm a Ron/Hermione person, but this is good too.

Reviewer: hpgal4993
Date: 04/18/06 12:07
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

A CLIFFIE ENDING?!?! Oh please write a sequal i was addicted(and still is) to this story! OH PLEASE PLEASE make a sequal! Why must you be so cruel. Ok rant over. I must say the chappie was very very good. I enjoyed it. I aslo like how harry and ginny's souls are linked! Great story 10/10! WRITE A SEQUAL PLEASE!!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 04/18/06 12:02
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

It's over? You left us hanging for a sequal right? Anyway, it was a wonderful story and I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 04/18/06 11:38
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

Gah! Cliffhanger ENDING?!?!? YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!!!!!!!

Reviewer: wolfdancer12
Date: 04/18/06 11:28
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

absolutely wonderful story! ive followed it from chapter 15, i absolutely love it! staying on my favorites, this one is!

Reviewer: passionflower
Date: 04/18/06 9:56
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

oooh. there has got to be a sequel hasnt there? i want to see what happens to harry and ginny!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 04/18/06 5:52
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

I presume you and your most awesome writing abilities are writing a sequel? Because I'm gonna read it. And if you don't, shall be very angered.

Reviewer: sunshinedaisies
Date: 04/18/06 3:33
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

There has to be a sequel or you are completely evil

Author's Response: Fear not, ye who read this story, a sequel is very much in the works.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 04/18/06 2:39
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

WHAT?! You can't end the story like that! You ARE going to write a sequel? Aren't you?! Pleeaasseee! *begs*

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 04/18/06 1:30
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

Oooooh! Nice little cliff hanger there at the end. Does that mean we your loyal readers are in store for a sequel?

Overall I really enjoyed this chapter. I really felt the emotions you wrote for Ginny, I could see her crying over Harry and holding him. Although there are some problems I have with the timeline. OWLs took about 2 weeks, so I would assume NEWTs will as well. So Harry's been in his comma for at least 2 weeks by the end. I find it a bit hard to believe that Harry could jump up out of bed and go walking with Ginny and propose. I DO LOVE the proposal! Don't get me wrong, I think that was best way to end this story. But maybe you should describe him proposing from his bed, or at least showing a few days of recovery before such an extensive walk.

Plus I'm assuming that Harry and Ginny talked about Harry not being welcome back at the ministry while on their walk, because he wasn't awake for that conversation from what we saw. Maybe you could include some more of their conversation, or at least tell us what they talked about. Perhaps a talk about the future, leading up to the proposal?

The last thing about the timeline is that if it took 2 weeks for Harry to come out of the comma, Draco probably would have known Harry survived the fall. Instead of talking to the Minister so much later. OH! But I love the little conspiracy theory going on here! The "Minister" line at the end really made me laugh.

SORRY! I'm really not trying to pick this apart! Honestly! It's just these are the reasons I had trouble with the timeline. The writing itself was very well done. And as I said before, the characterization was magnificent.

I really do hope you write a sequel. I would love to see what's in story for Harry and Ginny. And just what Draco plans on doing to try and ruin their love. I also would like to see Scrimgeour get his!

Author's Response: Okay...let me do my best to answer these. 1. Yes, there will be a sequel. 2. The Coma Issue - Essentially, when the spell is used, the person rests and recovers during the period of unconsciousness, so when they awake its as if there have simply been asleep. 3. They would have discussed it during the walk, but Harry already knew he would not be welcomed back when he stole the Veritaserum in Chapter 18. 4. Draco fled and went into hiding for the after the events of Chapter 19. The Minister still had to send out Aurors to search for him, as the public and the rest of the Ministry do not know of the deal between Draco and Scrimgeour. Scrimgeour lowered the priority on catching him when he discovered that Harry was still alive. Hope that wraps things up for you. Thanks for the review! And all the ones you have posted, hope you'll enjoy the sequel and other fics when I get them online! X

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 04/18/06 1:14
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

Wait one minute what do you mean 'the end' ? Well if that's the end I may just have to go and read it from start to finish. I enjoyed the last chapter.

Reviewer: hopelesslyhopeful
Date: 04/18/06 0:24
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

Well, I just finished reading your story in one sitting. Besides the fact my eyes are burning from staring at my computer screen and my butt is numb from sitting still for so long, I must say this has been a great experience. I TRULY loved this story...WOW! You are a very gifter writer, you capture all moments well; romance, drama, adventure...all areas are covered. I'm assuming there will be a sequel? Oh please say yes, I can't bare to wonder what happens next. Once again, a superb job with this fic!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 04/17/06 22:17
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

ahhhhh nice ending. some real clifage there man! hmm.........
nice one

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 04/17/06 21:21
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

Interesting ending. I love that everyone is alive, but you left several openended issues. Is there to be a sequel?

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 04/17/06 19:43
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen - Amor Vigoratus

Today, I got six emails saying that chapter 20 was updated, but when I checked it out, I was denied access because the moderators have not approved it yet. Please tell me what is going on. Thank you.

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 04/17/06 18:33
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

I concur!

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 04/17/06 18:33
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

I concur!

Reviewer: halfblood_wizard
Date: 04/17/06 0:43
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen - Amor Vigoratus

Just read ur whole story. I love it and hope 20 is validated soon!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 04/16/06 19:50
Chapter: Chapter Twenty - A Question Without An Answer

why does it say the chapters not validated? im confused i really want to read it! 1st reveiw go me!!! lol

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