Oh my god! That was totally hilarious! Thanks for putting a funny spin on the Harry Potter Universe!
I'm glad you got an A for this, you deserved it!
btw, WRITE MORE!!!!!
LOL! hilarious. i like how he keeps turning into an otter. and everyone's names. and...well, everything else, actually.
Th was hilarious! My English teacher gets annoyed with me because all of my Vocabulary sentences pertain to Harry Potter. She would hate something like this......so I would probably write something like this.
very fuinny i would give yo a= times by two
I wish my teachers gave out assignemts that gave me a free-for-all in creative writing, but alas, high school teachers only assign essays and boring stuff.
If I was a teacher I would want more assignemts handed in like this.
You get an 89% (4) (A)
*sob* how could you do this to me!! *sob*
lol, :D, very nice, how long did it take you to write?
how anyone on this planetr can doubt the amazingness and nobility of this needs a dose of being at their evil aunts and uncles, who never replace the toilet paper and chew with their mouths open.(and then turned into a newt) I award this A+++++++++++++(infinity more)
can you make a parody 4 chamber of secrets as well
Wow, gross but comically funny at the same time...didn't think that was possible...
That was by far the funniet story that i have read on this sight!!!
this defines LOL!!!! it is so creative, random, and I lurved the part about Ron and Herm- I mean Jon and Hermioneinoineinoe or w/e her name is! fantastique! (wat, I just had a french class...!)
I laughed. I cried! Technically, I cried because I laughed so hard. Great story!!!
I give it an F--!!! It was insulting and badly written!
That was......werid. Not that there's anything wrong with that!
In general it was funny and I liked it. Especially the whole math teachers thing. However, I still hate when people mock Harry Potter. Eeeeevvviiiilllll. . . .
Okay...hilarious...offensive, but hilarious...we all have to make sacrifices, though, I guess...
Pretty good story...there are several typographical and spelling errors...but in the midst of all the hilarity, they can almost be overlooked...
Nice job...I suppose...in spite of apparent slur on the HP series...
I found it annoying and badly writen.And it was very insulting,to most TRUE Harry Potter fans.
That was such a mad story!
if i had been the teacher marking it i would have given it A+++ for pure imagination and creativity