Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 13:36
Chapter: A Different Point of View

it seems to me that harry is a very famous story teller with the order either that or the order just want to humor him. i think the answer is obvious. good story teller

Author's Response: lol. i'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 13:24
Chapter: Lost and Found

Scum-bag Malfoy! I swear if he existed no ammount of magic death eaters nor god himself would save him from what i would do to him.

Author's Response: lol. same here

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 13:16
Chapter: The Beauty of the Ring

i now hate Mc Laggen more, a deep thanks. i never liked him. that vile, ceniving little Lockheart chlone, son of a...okay, okay count count, 1...2...3...4... all better. Of course what mc laggen would say now is "you have my permission to use that line in your story." *wink, wink!*

Author's Response: lol. i'm glad u dont like him... just wait till the sequel

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 13:04
Chapter: The Ring

Cool. By the way the ring that is supposed to bind a Potter and his Fianc is there ment to be something implied there?

Author's Response: in a way, yeah.

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 12:54
Chapter: The Diary

Is the ring the horcrux

Author's Response: naww. now horcruxes in this story

Author's Response: i mean no... no horcruxes in this story

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 12:45
Chapter: The Diary

Just a thought, do you by any chance watch LOST? I'm wandering because of the flashbacks.

Author's Response: Yeah i do. It's one of my top favorite shows. lol

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 12:39
Chapter: The Meeting

This chapter was good too. Nice telepathy thing going on.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 09/26/06 12:28
Chapter: The Mission

I don't think constructive criticism will be needed. You have talent as a writer. Me? I can write too but things always get mixed up when I try to write it keep up the good work.

Author's Response: aww thanks! I'm sure if u practice u'll get really good!

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/13/06 0:26
Chapter: Lost and Found

wow.

Author's Response: thanks... i think...

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/13/06 0:21
Chapter: The Beauty of the Ring

DUN DUN DUUUUUN. cliffy. damnit i hate those.

Author's Response: lol me too. but i love writing them

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/13/06 0:16
Chapter: The Ring

poor Arnold the pygmy puff.... sniff.......

Author's Response: lol i know

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/13/06 0:12
Chapter: The Diary

I always hated McLaggen. and guys like that always make me want to beat some serious petootie. I love the story so far. keeping me on edge.

Author's Response: lol thanks

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/13/06 0:04
Chapter: The Meeting

oooh very angsty

Author's Response: aww yes.

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 09/12/06 23:59
Chapter: The Mission

not too boring there if i say so myself

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: HPfanclub
Date: 09/02/06 14:30
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

i just want to say.... this was AMAZING!!! you have a real talent... i loved what you wrote and i couldn't stop reading.... it is a real masterpeice!!! keep writing!!!

Author's Response: awww thanks! I'm still writing the sequel so check it out!

Reviewer: IwishIwas_Ginny
Date: 09/01/06 23:42
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

great story. but yeah, the end was interesting.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 08/27/06 18:51
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

good story line but your chapters are short and to the point. they need bulking out a bit, add a bit more imformation and character feelings. thoughs. emotions, things like that

Author's Response: cool! thanks for the advice

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 08/20/06 10:36
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

I love how you answer the reviews. Alot of authors don't do that. Even when they'rew really good.

Author's Response: thanks! Yeah it gives me something to do too =]

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 08/20/06 10:33
Chapter: Always and Forever

I love this!!!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 08/20/06 10:28
Chapter: Connections

I hate Malfoy sooooooooooooo MUCH!!! But in the end, he was actually good. He only had to look inside his heart.
I know a song u could post on here. Only Hope from A walk To Remember. I think it would go along w/ Harry and Ginny's relationship.

Author's Response: thanks. yeah i put a quote from the movie in one of the chapter intros

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