Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:55
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

The ending was much better though. Nicely done!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:50
Chapter: Always and Forever

I didn't really like the ending of this chapter. I would have liked it wayy more if you made Harry/Ginny's wedding longer and possibly a full chappy.

Author's Response: i was going to but I didn't really want to jack it up and make it seem less romantic or anything.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:48
Chapter: Connections

malfoy that evil person! i liked this chapter. it told us what occured when harry was gone.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:42
Chapter: A Different Point of View

i like harry's point of view.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:40
Chapter: Lost and Found

Poor Draco...The last part of this chapter was too fast especially when Draco all of a sudden thanked Harry..a bit OOC.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:36
Chapter: The Beauty of the Ring

*gasp!* McLaggen being the spy doesn't shock me because he was always so ANNOYING. I thought Harry died! You scared me!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:30
Chapter: The Ring

OOO! I love Harry/Ginny ship! YOU ROCK!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 7:26
Chapter: The Diary

WOW! Is that Harry's proposal ring?! WHOA..

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/23/07 6:54
Chapter: The Meeting

Visions...pretty interesting

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/22/07 9:49
Chapter: The Mission

Evil Cliffies!!! ARGHHH!! Fairly adequate beginning. A bit too fast for my liking but everything else is pretty good. The flashbacks is something I liked in this first chapter.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/06/07 19:57
Chapter: The Mission

i really liked it
i dont think it was boring
often its hard to do something big in the first chapter because it can end up being much to fast
but i think this worked

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 19:22
Chapter: From the Eyes of the Serpent, Always and Forever part II

That is a very...unique...ending.
I'm glad there was a reason behind the lunacy...
Yay, time to go read the (hopefully happy) sequel!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 19:15
Chapter: Always and Forever

Wow...back from the dead...that is fairly creepy... Yay, they got married! Hurrah!! : D

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 19:08
Chapter: Connections

What does the new green Mark mean/do? Again, why didn't he die from the killing curse? I hope they FORCEFULLY AND VIOLENTLY dispose of McLaggen. *mutters angrily and plots while sharpening sword and axe*

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 19:01
Chapter: A Different Point of View

That's a sad story! Poor Harry! *tear, tear*

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 18:56
Chapter: Lost and Found

YAY, HARRY IS SAFE!!!
I was so scared that he died, thank god he's OK!! Poor Malfoy...I don't care.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 18:46
Chapter: The Beauty of the Ring

Holy [censored]!!!!!! I can't believe McLaggen is the [censored] that gave Harry away and sent Ginny to a trap! He's a Death Eater, and they didn't even know! Poor Harry, poor Ginny!
Why didn't Harry die...??

Author's Response: specialness

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 18:39
Chapter: The Ring

Ha, she did take her engagement ring! Yay! I hope they can find Harry, soon!

Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 18:33
Chapter: The Diary

Did she just take her own engagement ring? Ha! That diary is really good. I like how it explains a lot from the books, canon, and the 'past' of this.

Author's Response: glad you like.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/04/07 18:23
Chapter: The Meeting

Oh no!!! He has to keep fighting! He can't leave! Why is she seeing what is happening? Will she be able to find where he is? Why were they taken??

Author's Response: =D

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