That was a beautiful story.. It captured the true Severus Snape. I love this ship. It would make a great longer fanfic if you decide to continue. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I might one day, but for now this needs to stay as it is.
That was just spectacularly breathtaking. I've always been a Hermione/Snape shipper (Snape is probably my favourite character to write), but many stories of this type end up being cliche'd and OOC. Even though some might feel otherwise, I could really imagine canon Snape and Hermione like this. I could imagine that both would need a moment to just "be", and you captured that moment beautifully. Thank you, this piece was incredibly well written and I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I prefer to write all the characters to be as they are in the books, but I also want to play with them. So I tend to write them in character, but as they might be outside of what JKR writes about. So in this case that would be Hermione and Severus on their own, contemplating whatever they need to contemplate.
Wow....that took my breath away. it was so spectacularly moving. I was crying by the end of it. It was so beautiful yet so simple. Those two words brought so much emotion out of me i didnt realise i had it all. It was breathtaking. i was watching it all in my mind. It was like magic, it was magic. I cant believe you wrote that. It was like nothing on earth. I loved it. It had so much power and beauty in it that i didn't want it to end. And the way it ended was so simple yet so sweet. They barley shared any words between each other, but those words were enough.... OMG! I can't believe all that just came out of me, me a 13 year old school girl. You one shot was like a novel. Thankyou so much for writing it. it was spectactular. You made me spit forth poety....thankyou....it was magical.....
Author's Response: I am glad you loved it so much. It is still one of my favorite stories. I just wanted to write a different kind of Astronomy Tower story.
That was a truley moving story, so simple yet deep; as complex as life. I loved the way they didn't need to spoke so little and shared so much it really suits both the characters.
Author's Response: Whenever I think of this story now, it just makes me think about a connection you can have with someone. Whenever you feel something and you just look in to their eyes and know they feel the same.
This story is beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Happy New Year.
I like that you put the story in both of their POV's. It adds so much more to the story! Great job, I like the whole, maybe he has a sensitve side. 10/10!
Author's Response: I think everybody has a sensitive side, you just need to know how to bring it out. Sometimes it is more difficult and sometimes you need the right person to do it.
I am a devoted Draco/hermione shipper..But it's stories like this one that make me like Snape/Hermione! Even if I still see it as incredibly wrong..Hurrah for you! Well done for writing such a wonderful story..
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm actually the other way around. I like Draco/ Hermione but Love Snape/Hermione. I'm actually putting a Draco/Hermione story online on Pureblood. You can check it out if you want to.
absolutly breathtaking!!! i love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I guess this was one of my better moments.
I'm happy to say.. this is [b]the[/b] best one-shot I've ever read. :)))
Author's Response: Thanks. Just one of those plot bunnies that won't let you go, but gets better the longer you sit on it.
such imagery; a wonderful short piece
Author's Response: Thank you!
The imagery in this story is absolutely breathtaking. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you, I try and I'll keep on trying.
This was..it...I'm in lack for words here.. It was so sweet!! I'm a devoted R/Hr shipper, I know (we know) that this would never happen, but your story was so so so sweet and romantic!! Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. I know that R/Hr is what we see in canon, but this is so much more unusual, so much more fun to write.
wow, wonderful! :D A really beautiful story, I must say.
Author's Response: Thank you!
this ..this..this..is AMAZING I am amazed I personally am a fan of hermione/draco stpries and was surprised to see a snap/hermione section...it seems so odd...but this story is just beautifull..absolutely beautiful so simple yet so perfect, not mushy but so romantic...i love it and hope you have written or write other stories..this is great!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm actually in the middle of a Hermione/Draco story, so keep an eye out for that.
I am a Heron so I don't really think this could ever happen, but this is a truly amazing story. I'm going to look you up in a minute and see what else you've written, I can only hope it was a s beautiful as this one. :')
Author's Response: Thank you. I haven't written much yet, but there will be more. Stuff about Hermione and Severus. But a bit about Hermione and Draco as well. I guess I love odd ships.
Two Words: Absolutely Beautiful. I loved the story and the simplicity of it. I am eager to see more stories by you in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've just started but there will be more. I've got plenty of ideas anyway.
I loved it. Romantic, but not mushy oh-i-love-you-so-much romantic. Beautiful! I love how you made silence an important factor in this story. I've often thought that it is a thing that should be treasured in some occasions. Wonderful! 10!
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree that silence should be treasured but I only seem capable of it in my own stories.
Very beautiful and romantic. I'm not really into the whole Snape/Hermione thing, but I really liked this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. That means a lot to me. I hope you will read other HG/SS stories now too. Some are really good.
Hmmm ... That's interesting. In a strange way, I like it. It's well written, and I have nothing to complain about. It's not disgusting, it's just simple. Good. Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I will probably write something you'll find disgusting or that you can complain about sometime, for now I'm just too happy that you like this.
aww. Im a fan of the snape/hermione scene, and you do it really well. -bows- and hands you some jelly
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for the jelly :-)