I really, really, really loved the story! I also loved the idea of "sharing the silence and the elements"!
Intreging, very intreging, I liked it! nicely written kiddo!
i only have one word to describe it...
... Beautiful
Author's Response: I'll take that as the biggest compliment, thank you.
this is really cute and it made me smile when i read it. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Life is crazy, but I'm getting back into writing... I'll try.
This was a beautiful story. Thank you.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
I love the plot of this story. It is very original and you did a good job getting the emotions of each of them across to the reader.
One think that did stick out to me was Severus. He is just a bit too OOC for my liking. I know he can be a hard character to write, and you touched on the true him a little bit. I think he started off too fluffly, instead of him beginning as his surly self and progressing into a calmer more placid Severus. He would have been more irked when he first saw Hermione up there, and would have over time become used to the idea that he had to share the Astronomey Tower with her.
I love the idea that they spoke no more than four words to each other the course of what seemed like an entire term, but they got to know each other through the elements. It is very original. Overall a very good job. I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: This is one of those things you get in your mind and it just doesn't want to let go. I wrote it in maybe half an hour, but it came out right. As for Severus, he is a much calmer individual in this than normally, but normal is through Harry's eyes... We hardly know what Severus is like on his own.
it is so romantic
i really liked it
Author's Response: Thank you.
Short and fluffy! What a sweet story! Snape seemed a bit ooc, though.
Author's Response: How do we know this is OOC, when all we have is Harry's version of him?
i like it hbp makes snape appear bad... hes not... i wont beleve it
Author's Response: I don't believe it either. He might be a bad boy, but he's not evil.
That is a truely lovely story!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
I really enjoyed your story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks.
I am really warming up to Severus. He and Hermione have the "MINDS" for each other. Good Job........lets have more......
Author's Response: You can find more of my stuff on Ashwinder, at least if you like these two together.
Oh how lovely! such a nice story, my favourite line is "It’s a beautiful smile, I’m sure, though I have never seen it."
Author's Response: I should really read this story again, because I can't remember where I said that, though I do remember it.
Very eloquent. I liked it. You kept it in character as well. Maybe not canon, but the personalities were spot-on. Your desciptions were nice and vivid as well. Yay!
Author's Response: I find it strange when people say I write in character. I never go for something specific, that is just the way they are, to me. I'm just glad you agree with me, at least in this.
I'm trying to write the same couple into a fic, and yours is a great model! thanks
Author's Response: Good luck, I look forward to reading it.
Wow, I truly loved it. It was very beautiful (though I laughed and smiled in the beginneng about the house points and dunderheads). I liked the simultaneous thoughts that they had. I agree that they are in some (or more than some) aspects the alike. Again I loved the progress that it had, and not that it happen all of a sudden, just like that. Groetjes!
Author's Response: Whenever I read the books I have a lot of trouble picturing Hermione with Ron. I'm always waiting for her to wake up and realise that that will never work. I know that in the books this would never work either, but I prefer Severus to Ron every time.
