I loved how this was all a conversation!!!!!! What an ingenious idea! Sort of like Hemingway in that manner, but better. Maybe you will succeed in making me a Hermione/Snape shipper...
I thought this was hilarious! I loved how Hermione kept outsmarting Snape with every retort. I was a bit dubeous when I saw it would all be dialogue, I'd never read anything like that before, but in some ways I enjoyed it more than I would if it was full of cold glares, confident smiles and thoughtful pauses. ELNT
Well, Hermine definately got a bit snippier after leaving school. The story was awesome, keep it up!
*snickers* aww poor snape, tormented by hermione
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(laughs) I love it. :D Just like alll the rest of them.
Wow. That was amazing. The dialogue was very snappy and the characters spot-on. Very quick-paced, no times that dragged. Great word choice and very good insults/comebacks. I bloody loved it. GREAT job.
i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K
i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K
Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.
Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.
This together with "Painfully Obvious" had me smiling from start to finish. Great format, great banter, hope you do some more. Thanks.
tee hee I enjoy HG having the upper hand in your short story. The banter was lively and fun. thank you
I really liked this. You had a good balance in there--humor and some seriousness, with undertones of romance. On top of that, you threw in just enough clues about what was happening to set the reader’s imagination going, but left a lot of freedom to fill in the blanks. They both seemed IC was well--props to you for the story.
Really good Mary!! Brilliant title.
it was good for dialog only, and in general
awesome, they already go back and forth like an old married couple
hehehe... I love the banter! Very interesting format.
