Good story, definitely did not see the end coming from a mile away.
Very good story,but not very dark,and youre garbage at foreshadowing. Snape:Ursula is a Death Eater lol lets go save Harry
Remus: No youre death eater lol you kill Dumbledore get out
Then Snape saves Harry and dies doing it....Dont ruin the ending like that,i knew how it would end basically at that point.
ever heard of a sequel??? you should keep going until the battles over........
Great story so far! Although, I am confused: Ursula is about Tonks' age, but she went to school with Snape and the others. Are they younger than in canon? And I'm sorry if this appears twice.
Was this after or before Harry's seventh year? 'Cause if it was after, it was 1198. Good story!!!! Snape was a little OOC, he would NEVER call Harry Harry, no matter what the danger was.
Wow great ending line. I enjoyed your story so much, I really liked the idea of an unbreakable vow as a lie detector. Thanks for writing.
Snape is dead!! We should all be rejoicing right?! As hard as it is to believe, I feel sorry for old Snape. He did and didn't deserve to die but it's a good ending.
i think i cried.
;_;
i love snape so much.... if he dies in book 7 ill be so sad you dont even know. omg, ill just about kick it myself... *sniff sniff, wipes tear*
well, thank you for a great read!
--Saffron
i think i cried.
;_;
i love snape so much.... if he dies in book 7 ill be so sad you dont even know. omg, ill just about kick it myself... *sniff sniff, wipes tear*
well, thank you for a great read!
--Saffron
hecka! omg this is so amazingly fabulous!
must read on, i must!
Eeeee!!! And the plot thickens!!! This is getting hella good! Oooh, i love snapey ^_^
Wait, how could Kreacher be washing harry's socks? Was he freed? Just wondering...
I cant wait to keep reading!!
Ya, bella is hella psycho. I hate her so much! Gaaa!! I LUV U SIRIUS!!
ahem... sorry...
I like Ursula, she's hella chill. ;P
--Saffy
The excerpt really fits, I think. So, I've been looking for good post-HBP fics and I hope this'll be one of 'em. A great start, i can't wait to read on!
Much love,
Saffy
I like your story a lot for a reason. You share all the characters emotions perfectly! It might be kinda short (No offence!), it shows how everyone feels and looks. I also LOVED how you showed Arthur and Ginny. It's like they had a different personality.
~*~ Ginny~*~
That was so sad. Severus and Harry finally became friends. But than Sev died.That was interesting abt Sev and Harry being cousins.
Aw, I HATE this story. WHY THE HELL DID YOU MAKE POOR SEVVY DIE?!