I liked it. I always thought that harry and hermione would be good together. the part that shocked me was the pairing of ron and luna together. but like i said before I liked it.

This was funny. But i dont like H/Hr.
But i do like Ron/Luna.

This story is weird but real good!!!!!

Oh that was so funny, I'm crying with laughter. I think my favourite line was “What?” Harry asked her incredulously, “You won’t let me knock you up until we’re married, so I have to take refuge elsewhere.” I know it's completely OOC for Harry, but hilarious all the same. And if Ron couldn't end up with Hermione, then I'd have put him with Luna too, he could take the micky all day and she's so laid back she'd not care.

excellent!

Awesome! Fantastic!

It's ok. I kinda like it because Luna is in it.

xD I loved it, Hary was blunt thought with the whole "you won't let me knock you up till we're married" thing. Cool though.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you loved it. Hahaha, yeah, he was. I seriously wrote this when I was 14, and at 4am, so I was hardly thinking straight (and it came out kind of crappy/strange/ooc as a result, ha. Thanks for reviewing.

cute.... it seemed a bit rushed though, like you were trying to finish it too quickly.

Author's Response: I wrote that story when I was 14, and at 4am; I never intended for it to be a great story, just something fun to write after the events of HBP. I appreciate the critism though.

that was way to short!!! and we shoulda gotten details about ron and luna!!

Author's Response: Haha. I'm sorry you found it too short. and I didn't mean for this story to go into detail about Ron and Luna. If you want to know more about what happens with them, use that thing that God gave you called your IMAGINATION. Haha. I'm sure you'll be able to think of something...