Reviews For The Severed Souls
Reviewer: Natida
Date: 10/04/07 18:33
Chapter: Draco's Distress

O.M.G.! That is sooooo cool! Really, I nearly fell in love with Roderick! Heīs amazing! And Severus is amazing! I never thought I could like him, but you just did it! I canīt wait for the next chapter. Post it, please, I canīt wait!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/05/07 14:10
Chapter: Draco's Distress

I love how you are working some of DH into your story. :) It is sad to see Draco in such a state. I don't like him, but no one deserves that. I love the way you are writing Neville. :) I look forward to seeing how you keep this story going.
Cyns

Reviewer: MrsH
Date: 08/28/07 14:31
Chapter: The Darkest Night

Loved this sequel to the Daughter of Light -- right up until I realized it wasn't finished, and may never be finished. I know that real life (and other projects) get in the way, but I hope you get around to finishing it someday. It's well worth reading all the way to the end. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: The Half Blood Prince
Date: 08/16/07 9:18
Chapter: The Heir of Gryffindor

This is quite lovely, Jan.

I was re-reading your chapters because I needed to get back into the storyline again. Then we got a Scavenger Hunt and I remembered this chapter, how Snape confesses the real story to Harry - what really happened between Severus and Albus.

As usual, your storytelling is delectable. The prose flows, but what I enjoy the most is your characterization, how pitch-perfect the conversations (especially between Maeve and Snape) are. And of course - Rodrick is a charming as ever in your chapters.

Enjoying rereading this.
Best,
James

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 08/14/07 10:47
Chapter: Home Truths

Hey! Your story is incredibly good i really cant wait for the rest. Ive read a number of your other fics and hav to say that i think u are quite an accomplished writer.
Right, now hopefully you have all the encouragement to complete the fic asap!

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 08/14/07 10:47
Chapter: Home Truths

Hey! Your story is incredibly good i really cant wait for the rest. Ive read a number of your other fics and hav to say that i think u are quite an accomplished writer.
Right, now hopefully you have all the encouragement to complete the fic asap!

Reviewer: Conall Gulban
Date: 08/06/07 13:00
Chapter: Home Truths

absoutly amazing, astounding, wounderful, there are too many words to express this story. it actcually draws you into the text, i cant wait to see what you come up with next...... ;)

Reviewer: Jennifer M
Date: 08/03/07 9:57
Chapter: Home Truths

Can't wait to see what you come up with. It is sad that there can be no "happily ever after" for Maeve and Snape but no one ever expected Snape to outlive Voldemort by much anyway. Maybe you have a surprise ending we don't anticipate, sort of like the DH ending! Liked the update! Jennifer M

Reviewer: Conall Gulban
Date: 07/31/07 0:54
Chapter: The Deathly Hallows

absloutly amazing i have a story that i will be posting soon i hope you read it!!!

i wonder wat dumbledor will say to maeve



u keep writting ill keep reading ;)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 07/24/07 14:29
Chapter: The Deathly Hallows

I love thinking of Lugh driving the cart like that! LOL I await to hear what Rampton has to say to his father. Should be interesting. It will also be interesting to see if Maeve finds anyone to talk to. I look forward to reading more.
Cyns

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 07/22/07 7:18
Chapter: The Deathly Hallows

Hey i jus finished the book early this mornin (sunday 2am here)-wow! Your story is totally dif bt so kewl and im jus as anxious to see ur outcome hope ur updates are soon and long..

Reviewer: Jennifer M
Date: 07/21/07 9:31
Chapter: The Deathly Hallows

I read you update last night as I was not silly enough to stand in line for DH, but waited until this morning and got it at Wal Mart. Did enjoy it and am anxious to see how it plays out. J

Reviewer: Jennifer M
Date: 07/19/07 16:19
Chapter: Roderick Tries Again

I do so hope you are able to finish this story! I read both of them twice. J

Reviewer: Jennifer M
Date: 07/19/07 16:18
Chapter: Roderick Tries Again

I do so hope you are able to finish this story! I read both of them twice. J

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 07/18/07 3:45
Chapter: Like a Dagger in the Heart

Finally!!!!! Pls upd8 quicker nxt tym...
n dis is 1 hell of a cliffhanger!!!

Author's Response: Well, I managed a quicker update and I'm already working on the next chapter! We might get this finished soon. :-)

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 07/15/07 7:41
Chapter: Like a Dagger in the Heart

Your stories are excellent! I cant wait 4 the rest. Jus wanted to offer some encouragemnt to hopefuly finish this superb story befor deathly hallows is released at the end of the wk! good luck :)

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 07/13/07 20:39
Chapter: Like a Dagger in the Heart

Oh dear.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 07/11/07 11:28
Chapter: Like a Dagger in the Heart

Welcome back!! Great Chapter

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 07/10/07 19:09
Chapter: Like a Dagger in the Heart

It was great to see this story updated. Wow, Draco killed his own mother? I would have never suspected that. Interesting, very interesting. I hope you are able to update this story before too long. Cyns

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/18/07 1:09
Chapter: A Friend in Need.

I love Roderick calling Snape the Black Gloom-- which he is! But u betta stop worrying about other stuff and update a story which longs needs to be completed~ lyk, sumtym b4 DH Release! Pls Pls Pls update, I've been reading this for almost 2 years now (I think)... 4give me if i exagger8 but i think i'm ryt. Pls Pls update... ur pulling it out too much~ dere's sooo much to do!

Author's Response: I am so sorry to keep you waiting for updates. Real life has been a bit of a nightmare recently. I'm working on another chapter right now! And thank you for sticking with the story!

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