I loved it! You're such an amazing writer! Write more! (stories i mean)
This has to be one of the best fan fic's on this site...maybe even the best! I admire your ability to interpret the characters so perfecly. This story is amazing
One word, three letters: WOW! This is absolute3 one of the best fictions I'Ä*ve ever read. It's so emotioal and lovely, romantic and also heart-breaking. Not really heartbreaking, but it's so unbelievable sweet how someone can love somebody as much as Harry+Hermione in this fiction! You did a pretty good job! It's a brioliant fic and ... yeah ... just ... THANK YOU!
That was beautiful….and disturbing….and even though it was completely impossible it didn’t seem jarring because you wrote it in such a way that the reader could believe it as they were reading. I liked the way it jumped from view to view. One thing though--Harry saved Hermione from a mountain troll, not a cave troll, if I remember correctly. A minor, unimportant detail, but it happens in Hermione’s POV, and even if she’s descending into madness I don’t think she’d mix up her facts ;)
They don't start out as mad, they truly descend into it and their descent is seamless. Well done!
I've never read a fic quite like that. It was amazing and beautifully written. Great job.
that was ... beautiful. amazing, you are a brilliant writer.
To tell you the truth, I was close to tears. Yes, it may seem a little odd, but that kind of love...
I am just in awe. It was so vivid and the language is wonderful. You have so much talent: I can't believe that you could even express those emotions into words. It was great.
Oh My God!! Your style of writng is just simply amazing! The excellent vocabulary, the way u string everything together... I just can't believe it! I've never read anything more beautiful...
WOW! very good story! Keep Writing!!!
only one word really, and that is: damn. nice work. keep it up!
This is an amazing story. You have really captured that "got to have, will die if I don't feel the other person, completing my soul" kind of emotion. Love is almost too weak a word to describe it. It's that...feeling (lame I know) you get when all you have to do is look at the other person and just have to have them (and not intimately). I don't know. This really goes against cannon, but who cares. This is a great story.
That was a great story. I loved how you set out the story, one person's version after the other. One thing though, I dont really see how Dumbledore could kidnap Hermione. Apart from that, everything was great, I loved the story, keep writing!
wow....... that was something!! :)
woops forgot to say one other thing. You were right to call this a "descent into madness" and not simply love. Love would not allow the other to be so completely madly dependent on the other. Love would recognise what they were doing to the other person and seek to rectify it. I still love this though, don't get me wrong... you should definitely write more stories. Great job.
Wow, I must say you were right... that was quite disturbing. I can't see that ever happening with them since they are both very independent in canon, no matter how much Harry relies on Hermione, but there's no need to tell you that, since it's obvious you were simply writing an AU story. My fave line... "But I will gladly give up all their lives, and mine, to keep Harry alive. And I will burn the world to ashes, if Harry could be happy, really happy, for one day." I don't know why, its not quite as flowery as the rest, but I think it's because that line I could see Hermione actually saying. Some parts of this really delved into the melodramatic, as some words sounded too poetic, but I still loved it for how pretty/disturbing it was. Does that make sense? lol. I hope you write more, it's obvious you have a talent. You should post this on Portkey.org... (I'm an author there, I'm bamaslamma29) they're a Harry/Hermione shipping site, and the readers over there would eat this up. Thanks for such a marvelous story!
Wow....that is love--utter completion, devotion, need, beauty....wow.
Whoa.....that was unbelievably deep....no words to describe how much i loved it...