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Reviews For Stolen Innocence

Name: Phoenix25 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 17:13 · For: Stolen Innocence
Two mistakes.
1) Spelled Prophecy wrong.
2) Supposedly Voldemort said that Lily could be spared remember.
Along with that i thought that the story was not very indepth, and left me feeling like I needed more for this story to be good

Name: GryffindorGoddess (Signed) · Date: 03/18/05 10:54 · For: Stolen Innocence
*tear* so sad, and you don't draw it out, which probably makes it even more sad because that's how it probably happened- short and swift. great chapter, plz update soon

Author's Response: Thanks soo much for your review. I felt so sad writing about the death of James and Lily, but I thought it would be a good first story for fanfic. I'm glad you liked it, but that's how it finishes. Thanks again.

Name: kuro_tenshi_LL (Anonymous) · Date: 02/24/05 16:37 · For: Stolen Innocence
it was nice and sad. me likes

Author's Response: Thank you!! I like reviews! :P

Name: BVBandGirl (Signed) · Date: 02/23/05 19:06 · For: Stolen Innocence
I loved this story. I it's heartbreaking because it's written so consisly and to the point. great job

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I tried my hardest to write it so impersonally but still emotionally. Your review is very encouraging. Thank you!!

Name: IDoAppearToBeAlicia (Signed) · Date: 12/19/04 22:36 · For: Stolen Innocence
Great writing, it sad though but then the truth often is. Keep up the good work, i hope to see more stories from you soon.

Author's Response: I know the response it late, but thanks for your reviews on this story and my others!! Have you ever thought about writing any of your own fanfics?

Name: Kailyn (Signed) · Date: 12/07/04 19:10 · For: Stolen Innocence
I think you have put a lot of effort into capturing the night of their death. I like what you've done.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review; my first one on this story! It is quite sad, but it really only took me a double science lesson to write.

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