Two mistakes.
1) Spelled Prophecy wrong.
2) Supposedly Voldemort said that Lily could be spared remember.
Along with that i thought that the story was not very indepth, and left me feeling like I needed more for this story to be good
*tear* so sad, and you don't draw it out, which probably makes it even more sad because that's how it probably happened- short and swift. great chapter, plz update soon
Author's Response: Thanks soo much for your review. I felt so sad writing about the death of James and Lily, but I thought it would be a good first story for fanfic. I'm glad you liked it, but that's how it finishes. Thanks again.
it was nice and sad. me likes
Author's Response: Thank you!! I like reviews! :P
I loved this story. I it's heartbreaking because it's written so consisly and to the point. great job
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I tried my hardest to write it so impersonally but still emotionally. Your review is very encouraging. Thank you!!
Great writing, it sad though but then the truth often is. Keep up the good work, i hope to see more stories from you soon.
Author's Response: I know the response it late, but thanks for your reviews on this story and my others!! Have you ever thought about writing any of your own fanfics?
I think you have put a lot of effort into capturing the night of their death. I like what you've done.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review; my first one on this story! It is quite sad, but it really only took me a double science lesson to write.
