Reviewer: Slowdance
Date: 03/10/06 21:51
Chapter: Just a Little Less Than Charming

Hmmm...I'm most definitely sticking to my Molly-being-pregnant theory, seeing as she was searching for pickles...looking at new robes at Madame Malkins'...gaining a few pounds over the last few months. But, the story has been great so far, and I hope that I have as many dedicated fans of my own, up-and-coming story as you have! You really have a talent here, juniorauthor!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks...^^ Thanks, slowdance. Really.

Reviewer: Ronandchicken
Date: 03/09/06 21:54
Chapter: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

I saw you updated! Forget exam review! This is much more interesting. And de-stressing! Sort of... Heh. That was a heck of a chapter :D Congrats on another good output, this story just gets better and better. Silly Ron.

Author's Response: Ack! Another preson blowing off school! Haha, oh well. :-) Thanks very much!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 03/09/06 16:05
Chapter: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

things couldn't get worse? HA! but they certainly got more interesting. can't wait to see what happens, as i frankly have no idea. good luck on your O.M. competition! I'm in one too. see you in Tennessee!

Author's Response: Indeed, things did get a bit more interesting. And only more interesting things to come! Oh, and thanks! Another OMer! Hope you did well--better than us, anyway.

Reviewer: expecto_patronum_this
Date: 03/09/06 15:58
Chapter: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

Oh, I saw that that you updated and threw aside my Planning Project - I love this chapter. I had to refrain so hard from laughing overly loud and making the teacher attack me. I can't believe Ron went after Hermione! What an idiot ... but then again, he doesn't know the plot, so he doesn't realize he's being an idiot... I love this story.

Author's Response: Oh dear, you blew off an assignment to read this? I dunno whether to feel guilty or giddy! I'm glad you love it, though. Poor Ron. He doesn't know what he's in for....

Reviewer: xaiverharland
Date: 03/08/06 12:31
Chapter: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

Yes, that was great! 10/10! that ending couldn't have been better, i hope you explain why Molly and Arthur kept it a secret though.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Everthing will become clear in time....

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 03/08/06 11:16
Chapter: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

NANANANA BOO BOO! I got first review! Thank you so much for updating, junior author! And you've finally reached the climax, too...fancy that! Just a random conclusion....does Mrs. Weasley have MORNING SICKNESS? The family's big enough as it is! Love your ending :) 10!

Author's Response: Morning sickness? Whatever do you mean? *shifty eyes* The climax, at last. *sniffle* So close to the end... Yay! A 10!!!

Author's Response: Morning sickness? Whatever do you mean? *shifty eyes* The climax, at last. *sniffle* So close to the end... Yay! A 10!!!

Reviewer: Slowdance
Date: 03/04/06 13:09
Chapter: Sundry Intentions

Simply excellent! But, I have to question Mrs. Weasley's hunt for pickles: is she...impregnated? I mean, Mr. Weasley had asked her if she was all right and such... =] It's definitely on my favorites list, this story is!

Author's Response: Dun-dun DUN! Maybe, maybe not. You'll have to wait and see. Yay! Thank you for the honor of your favorite's list!

Reviewer: BludgerTwins
Date: 02/28/06 11:26
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

Just wanted to say how great I think this fic is. It's written really well, has a great storyline and I think you've captured the characters and their personalitys just as they should be. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I guess chapter 9 still hasn't been looked at....hmmm. Ah well. I'll try to hurry it up a bit.

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 02/26/06 23:19
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

You know, I am REALLY impressed with your writing. Other than the fact that this story seems to be draggin on and on and on (and on) - I find myself entrhalled with the story and I'm dying to see how it all comes together. You're doing a really good job with character presentation - especially with the twins. This story has it all - comedy, mystery, romance. Very good job. (Now hurry up and finish the dang thing. LOL)

Author's Response: Thanks! I know its long; that's my problem with writing, even on essays in school. I like to include alot of detail, twists...basically stuff that I think make the things I'm writing better. And longer. Sorry about the length, but I'm glad your otherwise content.

Reviewer: mageheart
Date: 02/24/06 17:15
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

I just read the entire thing, so.... PRESENTING: A Very Long and Slightly Obnoxious list of things I Liked About This...... Hermione making fun of Ron's vocabulary. Writing Style in Summary, The way Hermione listened to Ginny rather than Ron, Rogue bagpipe, Ron's flaming boxers and other "apparatuses", Ron's drooling over the dessert and subsequently being kicked, Percy being Minister; I kinda thought he might be but I had my doubts...., Could the letter be to Ron? Rats.... it's to "Vicky", CHOCOLATE CAKE!!!!! (I'm sick and haven't eaten anything solid in days), angry pug look, murderous kitchen utensils!, woman's intuition?! horrors!, B.O.G.I.E.S.!!!, degnoming bonus points, "At least it wasn't Bill....", "Pickles....", Elma!, corned beef, moldy trousers

Author's Response: :-) Thank you very much! An accumulative review, this is my first one of those. I'm glad you like it, mageheart! Thanks for reviewing! Hope you fell better--try some Lavender and Pepper Tea!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 02/23/06 19:38
Chapter: Burrow Goings On

OMG. I just saw the warning for your story. Are you going to resurrect Dumbles? I will love you forever if you do, juniorauthor! No pressure or anything, though. None whatsoever. Famous last words...

Author's Response: Umm, I just chose that because this is taking place BEFORE the sixth book--the summer after fifth year. Did I not use the correct warning? Maybe it should be AU... Yeah...

Reviewer: Oppungo
Date: 02/23/06 14:02
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

Oh, and the story you were talking about in your response to another review - it's mine!! =)

Reviewer: Oppungo
Date: 02/23/06 14:00
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

Yay for another chapter!! Ooh, I loved Hermione’s revenge, no sugar for Ron - just pepper! And I laughed out loud at it being another ‘lover’s tiff’ - and at Ron’s quick interruption (even if it was only a dream!)! Also, “not you—just that filthy toerag” made me giggle! (Should there be a space; toe rag? Not sure!!) I especially liked the description of Viktor, “star Quidditch player of Bulgaria and England’s newest deranged murderer”! Hmm…chickens!! Oh dear, Ron and Hermione on separate sides of the photo - I hope that isn’t a sign!! I hope the photo gets taped back together - with Ron and Hermione back together!! Can’t wait to see what happens when Ron gives her the locket - update when you can!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'll look up 'toe-rag' in a moment, and fix it. Just got to remember a place where the word is used....hmm... It was yours, then? Well, I loved it, just so you know. It made me yell at the computer--but in a good way. :-) Next chapter was in queue yesterday! Cross your fingers!

Author's Response: Whoops. The story about Ron and Hermione, I mean, was yours--I responded to your review below this one by accident. Oh well...!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 02/22/06 21:57
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

Poor Ron, he needs more confidence or he will be Overly Git-like forever.

Author's Response: Hear, hear!

Reviewer: Ronmionie forever
Date: 02/22/06 19:06
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

i love your story it is so adorableand true !!!!!! This last chapter actually made me sad. I felt sorry for ron that he had a dream that krum hurt hermionie!!!!! love your story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, but I'm sorry I made you sad! It had the desired effect, though, for sure. :)

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 02/19/06 0:38
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

I really want to see when they get together... because it isn't an if.... Hermione and ron WILL get together. I want the next chapter noow now now!!!

Author's Response: Well, this is a Ron and Hermione fic, so it would be natural for them to get together. However, there are a few that it wasn't so--and very sadly, too. I forget who the author was, but someone wrote a one shot in which Ron came home all happy to propose to Hermione finally, and Mrs. Weasley looks at the front page and the headlines are 'Hermione Granger, Dead'. It was really sad--an excellent fic!-- but so Ron/Hermione-ish nontheless. Why am I on this rant, though? Oh, yeah. For no reason at all--and to ask you, can you really be so sure that they will get together? Dundun-DUN!

Reviewer: echlomb
Date: 02/17/06 20:28
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

OH MY GOD I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY. And that dream! I thought it was real! But then I thought he was hallucinating....but seriously, you had me going there. You have made me completely in love with Ron. Pleeease update soon! 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It seems I've thrown a few people through a loop, eh? Yay! And I've, er- converted?-someone into a Ron fan! Yay-again! Haha! And many thanks for the ten! *pokes star thingies happily*

Reviewer: megsan_88
Date: 02/16/06 20:13
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

haha. oops. i meant that the story in it's entirety makes me smile. lol.

Author's Response: Ah--I see. Even better!

Reviewer: Hermione920
Date: 02/16/06 16:42
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

your story is my favourite! I love it so much! Your writing is jest like JKR's- it's amazing! Hurry up with the next update- i can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: You're too kind! I'm a favorite? Yay! Next update in a few days, sorry to dissapoint you!

Reviewer: megsan_88
Date: 02/16/06 15:51
Chapter: Feeling Krummy

yay! i'm so excited about the new chapter! :) which is actually kind of sad when you think about it, but anywho! i just LOVE your story! it makes me smile :)

Author's Response: That's odd--the sad chapter made you smile? I don't care--I'm glad you like it!

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