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Name: Hermione171 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/06 20:07 · For: Draco's Reflection
I absolutely loved it, please write more!!

Name: Islander (Signed) · Date: 12/30/05 8:07 · For: Draco's Reflection
VERY good story! You did a wonderful job with Draco; I think this story closely follows what he probably went through in HBP. You're a great writer!

Name: empop (Anonymous) · Date: 12/26/05 19:18 · For: Draco's Reflection
That was awesome! I could not stop reading it! I really liked how it flowed and how you depicted Malfoy as, not the heartless killer we always thought he was, but an innocent. I have to say that I actually felt sorry for him when he learned that he didn't get pleasure out of doing the Dark Lord's work, as he always thought he would. And, now, there is no turning back. Please, please write more!

Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 12/25/05 22:53 · For: Draco's Reflection
That was really good! Please write another part! I like how you showed that Malfoy felt regret about what he had just done, but he felt he couldn't go aginst what his father had always taught him, and so he returned to Voldemort. Good Job!!!

Name: Samuri Rose (Signed) · Date: 12/22/05 12:33 · For: Draco's Reflection
This is AMAZING! I absolutely love the plot and the Decisions of Malfoy. WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!! 10/10

Name: TheDarkLord (Signed) · Date: 12/13/05 10:03 · For: Draco's Reflection
That was the best piece i have read on here, excellent job. i was completely absorbed by this excellent work. i love how you have considered how Draco would REALLY feel, this is exactly as he would act i really feel as if it was Draco Malfoy! please keep writing, i love all this dark stuff, very intersting! keep up the good work...

Name: ligiligirl (Signed) · Date: 12/11/05 11:22 · For: Draco's Reflection
Why did my review repeat? Ah well... This is the only Dark/Angsty fic I like; I generally avoid these things like the plague.

Name: ligiligirl (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 20:34 · For: Draco's Reflection
Wow. Wow! WOW! I'd change the summary, tho, I only read this because I was bored. Anyway, you really did a great job. I thought that would be exactly what Draco would do. Is this a one shot? I hope not. If it is, could I pretty, pretty, please do a sequel/companion thingy? I would email you each chapter before I submitted it. This has potential. PLEASE?!?!?!?!?! BTW:912837645546738219/10 (yes, I am a suck up if I have to be)

Name: ligiligirl (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 20:34 · For: Draco's Reflection
Wow. Wow! WOW! I'd change the summary, tho, I only read this because I was bored. Anyway, you really did a great job. I thought that would be exactly what Draco would do. Is this a one shot? I hope not. If it is, could I pretty, pretty, please do a sequel/companion thingy? I would email you each chapter before I submitted it. This has potential. PLEASE?!?!?!?!?! BTW:912837645546738219/10 (yes, I am a suck up if I have to be)

Name: PureBloodWitch (Signed) · Date: 12/06/05 18:27 · For: Draco's Reflection
I loved your story; it showed Draco exactly how I see him being. You have a great style of writing keep it up!

Name: Evilpersonified (Signed) · Date: 12/03/05 16:12 · For: Draco's Reflection

Well, first let me just say that this fic was wonderful. It gave me chills at times, and my heart really went out to Draco, whom I now feel sorry for. I’m not sure whether this is a good thing or not, but it does prove your talent as a writer. Now, as per usual, I am going to start the review off with a little nit picking, then move on to better and brighter things.

In the sentence He had left Hogwarts but a few days ago, eager to fulfill, fulfill should be spelled fulfil, which is very minor, but I thought I would mention it. Another minor error, which is more about the flow of the sentence is “You will ascend quickly in the ranks, my son, if you just follow my footsteps. which I feel needs a in after my and before footsteps. I also wondered if Narcissa was a Death Eater, when you wrote that Draco wanted to follow his parents (plural) in their service for the Dark Lord. Just a question…hehe. Other than that, I actually have no more nitpicky things. Aren’t you lucky?!

Okay, now, I just have to say how much I LOVE the first section! It seems a very characteristic reaction of Lucius and Draco, and I like that they are both in character. The initiation scene was also near perfect. I say near because nothing is perfect. And this is so brilliant, exactly how I imagined the initiation to be. You seem like you have gotten inside Voldemort’s head and seen how he would making his Death Eaters loyal and prove that they were brave. The Cruciato curse is a nice touch: I really like it. I think this was possibly my favourite part of the fic.

I also liked the line A feeling of sickness washed over him. They were innocent, had had nothing at all to do with the Wizarding world. He had thought he would enjoy this sort of thing, but he did not feel any sort of thrill at all. Murder did not hold the same enjoyment that taunting someone did…He had not felt that rush of power his father had spoken of, did not feel enthusiastic about what he had just done at all. And now, for the first time ever, he saw what he truly was: a coward. I love this. It’s so emotional, and makes me feel for him. Such an epiphany must be difficult if you have just sworn your life away, and I love how you captured his emotions.

Well, that’s the end of the review, I suppose, but again, just let me say how much I really like this fic. It deserved to be one of those recognized fics, and I congratulate you.

Author's Response: Thanks. I did look over the spelling of fulfill, and it's correct as it stands according to all the sources I've checked. I might go back to edit that one line by adding "in"...yeah, it does interrupt the flow a bit. Thanks for your wonderfully thoughful review!

Name: halfbloodprincess22 (Signed) · Date: 11/27/05 15:51 · For: Draco's Reflection
I've said this about other stories and I'll say it again: I love stories that show a different side of otherwise nasty characters, such as Draco or Snape. So this is one of my favorites I've read!

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks a lot! I do enjoy these kinds of stories too, but I also love to write them. One of my favorite characters to write is actually not from HP...I love writing things from Gollum's POV (from LOTR). He's such a wonderfully twisted character, and I think that anyone striving to write things from a bad guy's POV should start with him. I just looked at my viewings count for this story - over 25000 reads! Thanks, guys!

Author's Response: Oops, typo there...I meant to write 2500 reads. *sheepish grin* Big difference, but I'm still quite happy!

Name: ToastyPhantom (Signed) · Date: 11/27/05 0:48 · For: Draco's Reflection
AWSOME STORY! You really got Draco's character well (like everyone said) and I am sure JK would be proud if she read this. Keep writing! You definately have a gift!

Author's Response: *blushes* I'm very flattered - thanks! It's not every day that my writing is said to be something a famous author might be proud of. I'm actually in the process writing another huge HP story, but it's a crossover (and they don't allow those on mugglenet). You can check it out if you want on harrypotterfanfiction.com, screen name Linaewen. Thanks for the review!

Name: rita_skeeter (Signed) · Date: 11/26/05 11:27 · For: Draco's Reflection
Fantastic story! Wow, you really captured Draco's character very well. This definitely deserves to be featured. 10/10

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! Muchas Gracias! Thanks! (In a foreign language mode at the moment...)

Name: Lena Jackson (Anonymous) · Date: 11/23/05 19:55 · For: Draco's Reflection
Oh...my...gods....That story was absolutely amazing! Like so many others have said, it shows Draco as a real person, not some dunderhead who's just doing what he's told. Awesomely well written!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: hal_01 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/05 6:42 · For: Draco's Reflection
Really fantastic. Draco really was more interesting in the sixth book. I liked your interpretation of the unbreakable vow, before you knew about it. Interesting. It was well written, and fun to read. Thanks for making this late hour fun ... I love Harry Potter fanfiction.

Author's Response: Weird how the mind can come up with things similar to the Unbreakable Vow at two in the morning, isn't it? That's one reason I was startled when I read chapter 2 of HBP. Anyways, thanks for the review!

Name: sparx (Signed) · Date: 11/18/05 7:36 · For: Draco's Reflection
That was fantastic! Very well-written great descriptions, with great insight to his feelings at the end. And like some of the other reviewers said, I imagine this is how Draco would feel if he eventually did become a Death-Eater. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Name: queen_of_malfoys (Signed) · Date: 11/17/05 0:44 · For: Draco's Reflection
Oh my goodness. This is amazing. Draco is my favourite chracter, and there are not enough deep stories about him like this. This is exactly how I think he would feel. Thank you so much for making my day wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoy writing about Draco, especially since his character is so one-sided from Harry's point of view. Thank you so much for the review!

Name: hp3190 (Signed) · Date: 11/13/05 20:03 · For: Draco's Reflection
great story. i think it is EXACTLY what draco feels, etc. i'm going onto your author page right now to see if there are any other stories i can read of yours!! :) i wanna see the snape one... 100/10!! AWESOME STORY!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked my story...and I sincerely regret to say that I don't have anything else posted at the moment. I just haven't had time to write my Snape family fic, what with college applications and all that. Look for it some time in December...it might end up being my Christmas gift to the HP fanfiction world. Thanks for the review!

Name: lunafish (Signed) · Date: 11/13/05 19:19 · For: Draco's Reflection
What a fascinating look this story is at the character of Draco Malfoy; it also gives some really nice insight into what it means to be a Death Eater. I especially like this line: "At that moment, pain and pleasure flooded simultaneously through Draco." To me, that line really defines the new existence Draco has chosen for himself. There is the satisfaction of belonging and of making his father proud, but also the regret of losing a part of himself to his new Master. It's sad that Draco doesn't realize what he's lost until it's too late. But your story really sets the scene for his moment of indecision in Book 6 (and, if I'm not mistaken, it looks as though you wrote this story before that book even came out! Impressive.). As you show us here, his regret might have come almost instantaneously, but what choice does he have really once he enters the Dark Lord's lair? Sadly, as you show us, none. I truly enjoyed reading this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I did in fact write this before book six came out (which is why I thought it really weird when I started reading about Snape's Unbreakable Vow and how the spell looked). I'd finished reading the series and had been looking at several fanfics and, for some reason, wanted to explore Draco's personality even more. He really is a character to be pitied, and I wanted to show that. Thanks again for the review!

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