As a good writer, you wear your Invisibility Cloak very well, indeed! That's the way it's suppose to be...I never felt you; only Harry slapping Hermione's hand away from the candy; the mystery of his determination to bogart as many of his chosen sweets as possible; the insecurities of teenage attraction; the "oh yeah, I forgot about that rumor" feeling when the reason for him stashing green m&m's was reminded to us; and the softness I felt as Hermione grabbed some greenies for Ron. I felt it all...and I remembered "when"... Thank-you for your subtlety and allowing a muggle lady her long-ago memories. I just had a moment of a lovely, misty smile...
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked this. It is one of the things that I have written that I like the most. Glad I could give you a good moment in your day.
Okay, you've given me sweaty palms from reading this! This was really, really creative and I love the green M&M storyline. There really is nothing like a first kiss and you captured that so well. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for taking the time to review this. It was a lot of fun to write, and I'm glad you liked it.
He he he! I loved this story! Harry saving the green m&ms for Ginny! That's so great! And I love how Hermione states that it's a rumor, but takes some to Ron anyway. You are so creative!
Author's Response: Thanks. This was fun to write, and you never know there is usually just a little bit of truth in most myths. Hermione says so herself, that's why she takes a few of them to Ron.
Hey, that was a great story, very well-thought. You are a great author. Keep writing, I want to see how the story progresses and how you grow as you write it.
Author's Response: Thanks, but as this is a one shot, you will have to read Blood Traitor and Unlocked mind to see how I do with a bigger story line and plot.
That was SO sweet, filled with fluffy goodness. lol I remember hearing that rumor in intermediate school.
Author's Response: Yeah, sweet and fluffy. What can I say. Thanks for taking the time to read/review.
Very sweet and quite original. Thanks for the pick-me-up.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed it.
very sweet! loved it *10*
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Nothing like a nice one-shot for an afternoon break.
Author's Response: Thanks