Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/05/07 16:14
Chapter: The Final Night.

Ellie packed alot of punch for a three year old. Great story!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/05/07 16:10
Chapter: Coming After The Girl

Poor Ellie losing everyone so close to her so young. I really like how you set this up as kind of a prequel story.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/05/07 16:07
Chapter: The First Night

Ellie must have been a real handful when she was a little girl. Thank you Severus! Great chapter

Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 04/05/07 13:45
Chapter: The Final Night.

ABSOLUTELEY FANTASTIC! ((again-i hope you like praise!:))

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/06/07 19:01
Chapter: Coming After The Girl

I love this, it explains everything!

Reviewer: Pruvnhtmn
Date: 08/16/06 14:34
Chapter: The Final Night.

awww i loved this story the duels were very good. nice way to get some backstory in.

Reviewer: Lady Snuffles
Date: 07/01/06 0:19
Chapter: The First Night

I would like to say, "Happy one year anniversary!" I know that this story will have been up for a year in like...two weeks, but I'm going on vacation tomorrow until the fifteenth so I'm sayin' it early instead of late!

Reviewer: Lady Snuffles
Date: 07/01/06 0:19
Chapter: The First Night

I would like to say, "Happy one year anniversary!" I know that this story will have been up for a year in like...two weeks, but I'm going on vacation tomorrow until the fifteenth so I'm sayin' it early instead of late!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/11/06 12:00
Chapter: The Final Night.

That series was the best series I have ever read EVER!!!! I'm just soooo sad about the deaths!!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/11/06 11:38
Chapter: Coming After The Girl

That is so sad, I feel my heart breaking. I cant bear it!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/11/06 11:13
Chapter: The First Night

That was really horrible!!! I didn't like it, poor Andrew and Jane!!

Reviewer: HPFCNina
Date: 06/07/06 23:22
Chapter: The Final Night.

oh my God, that's sooo sad!! poor Ellie. beautiful story!
~NiNa!!!

Reviewer: HPFCNina
Date: 06/07/06 22:47
Chapter: The First Night

no, I didn't enjoy it! it was sad!! hahaha, but it was a good chapter, if that's what you're asking. lol

Reviewer: Lady Snuffles
Date: 05/19/06 17:52
Chapter: The Final Night.

Another wonderful story! Keep 'em coming, I'll be angry if you stop writing! *glares with a warning pout*

Reviewer: sue ginny
Date: 04/15/06 11:41
Chapter: The First Night

god how sad!!!!but great as always....
10/10

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/17/06 17:36
Chapter: Coming After The Girl

*figurative sob* No tears yet, but what happened is so sad. No one should have to suffer things like that so early in life. Great writing, though.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/17/06 17:25
Chapter: The First Night

I really like this chapter, but it's so SAD!! *sob* Poor Andrew and Jane! Poor Ellie! Oh, I also read The Girl Who Lived and The Unspeakable Power, and they were awsome. They caused me to put you on my 'favorite authors' list. Hope you don't mind.

Reviewer: ginnylovesharry
Date: 12/07/05 15:28
Chapter: The Final Night.

I have just finished the Girl Who Lived and this story touched my heart. You definitely deserve that6 extra credit. Well done!

Reviewer: ginnylovesharry
Date: 12/07/05 3:10
Chapter: The First Night

I just finished the Girl Who Lived and just had to read this. It was excellent and I am off to read the next chapter. You are a wonderful writer.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 12/05/05 15:18
Chapter: The Final Night.

Geez, it took me long enough to stop by and read this one. I read your one shot ages ago and just never really got around to reading this one! I just wanted to say that I loved every bit of it! I loved how Ellie didn't like to go to sleep because everytime she did, the "bad man" came back. I was like that sorta when I lost my mom. I wanted to sleep because everytime I did, she was there. Totally relate to how you made Ellie feel. I just love your writing so much! You're such an artist with words!!

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