Reviews For Dementor's Kiss
Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/24/06 9:22
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

This is a really good poem for something so short! I noticed only one grammerical mistake- in line five, instead of writing "Slowly drowning," you wrote "SLowly." I should tell you, though, that line was very well written. My favorite line would have to be "As the Shadows swallow me." The fact you capitilized "Shadows" really made a bold yet graceful statement. This poem showed how a short poem with well-chosen words can overpower a long poem with meaningless words! Great job!

Author's Response: When I was typing it on the computer I think I was really excited about it and didn't really pay attention to what I was capitalizing... thus the SLowly and the "Shadows" being capitalized, I fixed the "L" though and I'll keep the Shadows the same. Thanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: clcc3
Date: 04/18/06 16:38
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

VERY original. i always wondered what it was like to be kissed by a dementor, now i know!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14
Date: 04/16/06 11:59
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

Good descriptions. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/12/06 21:05
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

Nice idea for a poem. Great work!

Reviewer: RachWiz
Date: 08/09/05 19:11
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

cool poem I liked it I also wrote a dementor attack poem pwease read!

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny_rox
Date: 07/26/05 9:33
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

Actually I submitted 10/10 I'm still not sure why i wrote 9/10

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny_rox
Date: 07/26/05 9:32
Chapter: Dementor's Kiss

That was realy short , but super good. I realy liked it and I am not sure why no one has already reviewed it. but any way here you go 9/10

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