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Reviews For Dementor's Kiss

Name: Lilypudding (Signed) · Date: 04/24/06 9:22 · For: Dementor's Kiss
This is a really good poem for something so short! I noticed only one grammerical mistake- in line five, instead of writing "Slowly drowning," you wrote "SLowly." I should tell you, though, that line was very well written. My favorite line would have to be "As the Shadows swallow me." The fact you capitilized "Shadows" really made a bold yet graceful statement. This poem showed how a short poem with well-chosen words can overpower a long poem with meaningless words! Great job!

Author's Response: When I was typing it on the computer I think I was really excited about it and didn't really pay attention to what I was capitalizing... thus the SLowly and the "Shadows" being capitalized, I fixed the "L" though and I'll keep the Shadows the same. Thanks for the review!!!!

Name: clcc3 (Signed) · Date: 04/18/06 16:38 · For: Dementor's Kiss
VERY original. i always wondered what it was like to be kissed by a dementor, now i know!

Name: HorcruxHunter14 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/06 11:59 · For: Dementor's Kiss
Good descriptions. I really enjoyed it.

Name: midnight_me (Signed) · Date: 01/12/06 21:05 · For: Dementor's Kiss
Nice idea for a poem. Great work!

Name: RachWiz (Signed) · Date: 08/09/05 19:11 · For: Dementor's Kiss
cool poem I liked it I also wrote a dementor attack poem pwease read!

Name: herm_own_ninny_rox (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 9:33 · For: Dementor's Kiss
Actually I submitted 10/10 I'm still not sure why i wrote 9/10

Name: herm_own_ninny_rox (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 9:32 · For: Dementor's Kiss
That was realy short , but super good. I realy liked it and I am not sure why no one has already reviewed it. but any way here you go 9/10

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