Goodness gracious...you really know how to squeeze the life out of someone’s heart don't you...wow...really painful but beautiful all the same...your ways of expressing devastating information is just...amazing...keep it up =)
You really know how to write heartbreak don't you? Excellent chapter!
Continue! Continue! Update soon! I can't wait!
Great story! I just read it from the beginning, and I love the way you leave most of the descriptions open for us readers to fill them in! When Ron is sad, I'm sad, but it seems fitting. I've never read any other story like this one. Wasome, as I like to say! Update soon! -Kate Mari
hi deia, i love your story, it's so sad and memorable. you can be a good novelist someday. thanx 4 d wonderful story
This is excellent but it seems to be taking a long time to get chapters up. Are you having trouble with the mods too?
Oh God!!! This was so good! Please stop that pain they're all going through! And please update soon!!!!
Ron is the only character that makes me hurt completely when he hurts ::sob:: That chapter. Was so. Good. Update soon!!!
*Fighting back the tears* I hate it when Ron hurts, it makes me hurt with him. Not that I don't love the story concept, and well, pretty much everything I've read. It's just depressing. :( I am so ready to read more, you're the author, make him feel better, PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Anyways, great job!
thats sad short but good and still really sad nothing can come between ronand hermione that wouldn't work so i know its corny but i do believe therell be a happy ending
Bit short, but a good update. You've captured Harry particularly well in this chapter. Good one.
i just read all of the posted story then and it thought it was great!!!! plz plz plz update soon!!!!! really well written and i luv the story!
Dang it cliff hangers! The point is you have to update soon! Pleeeeeeeeze. I NEED to know what happens next.
I think that you are a brilliant author, I really like how you built up interest on who Dumbledor's daughter was. Please update soon!!!
I've been following this story for a while, Ijust haven't reviewed til now because I'm lazy. Anyways, you have a fabulous story going here! I don't really read these kind of fics very often because they remind me of cheesy soap operas, but yours is really good! You have to update this very soon or I will die of suspense and leave you nothing in my will.(*evil laughter*) Anyways, the point is update! *10*
I've just read all the chapters in one sitting, and I seriously hope you don't have to make us wait too long for an update. This is one of the most original plots I've read in a while, and everybody seems really in character. I also really like the way you switch between everyone's points of view. It gives a really good understanding of how people are feeling. Keep up the very good work.
wow, this story is really good. it has a different spin than everyone elses. brilliant thought process. i'm anxiously awaiting to read more. :)
I love this story. I can see this story going many ways one the prophecy somehow works out to mean Ron or Hermione defies prophecy or they follow the prophecy leaving Ron broken hearted. I hope its the first one personally! 10++
Awww ::hugs Ron:: I love him so much. Ahhh good chapter but ahhh short chapter and ahhh cliffhanger!! Yes, it does sorta help that chapter 6 is already written.
So far so good, this is an enjoyable story. I'm looking forward to see where you go with it.