Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 05/10/05 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 7

Goodness gracious...you really know how to squeeze the life out of someone’s heart don't you...wow...really painful but beautiful all the same...your ways of expressing devastating information is just...amazing...keep it up =)

Reviewer: yummyweasley001
Date: 05/10/05 11:04
Chapter: Chapter 7

You really know how to write heartbreak don't you? Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Eos1982
Date: 05/10/05 6:44
Chapter: Chapter 7

Continue! Continue! Update soon! I can't wait!

Reviewer: Kate Mari
Date: 05/07/05 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 6

Great story! I just read it from the beginning, and I love the way you leave most of the descriptions open for us readers to fill them in! When Ron is sad, I'm sad, but it seems fitting. I've never read any other story like this one. Wasome, as I like to say! Update soon! -Kate Mari

Reviewer: maldita
Date: 05/06/05 10:32
Chapter: Prologue

hi deia, i love your story, it's so sad and memorable. you can be a good novelist someday. thanx 4 d wonderful story

Reviewer: yummyweasley001
Date: 05/05/05 7:49
Chapter: Prologue

This is excellent but it seems to be taking a long time to get chapters up. Are you having trouble with the mods too?

Reviewer: Eos1982
Date: 05/03/05 7:35
Chapter: Chapter 6

Oh God!!! This was so good! Please stop that pain they're all going through! And please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Ronandchicken
Date: 04/30/05 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 6

Ron is the only character that makes me hurt completely when he hurts ::sob:: That chapter. Was so. Good. Update soon!!!

Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 04/26/05 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 6

*Fighting back the tears* I hate it when Ron hurts, it makes me hurt with him. Not that I don't love the story concept, and well, pretty much everything I've read. It's just depressing. :( I am so ready to read more, you're the author, make him feel better, PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Anyways, great job!

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 04/25/05 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 6

thats sad short but good and still really sad nothing can come between ronand hermione that wouldn't work so i know its corny but i do believe therell be a happy ending

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 04/23/05 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 6

Bit short, but a good update. You've captured Harry particularly well in this chapter. Good one.

Reviewer: jezzagoose
Date: 04/19/05 6:25
Chapter: Chapter 5

i just read all of the posted story then and it thought it was great!!!! plz plz plz update soon!!!!! really well written and i luv the story!

Reviewer: falling_leaves
Date: 04/17/05 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 5

Dang it cliff hangers! The point is you have to update soon! Pleeeeeeeeze. I NEED to know what happens next.

Reviewer: harrypotterfan3004
Date: 04/17/05 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 5

I think that you are a brilliant author, I really like how you built up interest on who Dumbledor's daughter was. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: futureJKR
Date: 04/12/05 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 5

I've been following this story for a while, Ijust haven't reviewed til now because I'm lazy. Anyways, you have a fabulous story going here! I don't really read these kind of fics very often because they remind me of cheesy soap operas, but yours is really good! You have to update this very soon or I will die of suspense and leave you nothing in my will.(*evil laughter*) Anyways, the point is update! *10*

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 04/08/05 10:40
Chapter: Chapter 5

I've just read all the chapters in one sitting, and I seriously hope you don't have to make us wait too long for an update. This is one of the most original plots I've read in a while, and everybody seems really in character. I also really like the way you switch between everyone's points of view. It gives a really good understanding of how people are feeling. Keep up the very good work.

Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 04/07/05 12:34
Chapter: Chapter 5

wow, this story is really good. it has a different spin than everyone elses. brilliant thought process. i'm anxiously awaiting to read more. :)

Reviewer: whispercat12
Date: 04/04/05 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 5

I love this story. I can see this story going many ways one the prophecy somehow works out to mean Ron or Hermione defies prophecy or they follow the prophecy leaving Ron broken hearted. I hope its the first one personally! 10++

Reviewer: Ronandchicken
Date: 04/04/05 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 5

Awww ::hugs Ron:: I love him so much. Ahhh good chapter but ahhh short chapter and ahhh cliffhanger!! Yes, it does sorta help that chapter 6 is already written.

Reviewer: yummyweasley001
Date: 04/04/05 8:57
Chapter: Prologue

So far so good, this is an enjoyable story. I'm looking forward to see where you go with it.

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