I loved this fic right up until the last paragraph, it must have been so shattering to find out it was a dream. Really well written, and it was nice to get a glimpse of what Harry's life would've been like if Sirius hadn't gone to Azkaban.
I loathe and despise stories that end with 'it was just a dream' but you pulled it off really, really well. A lot of fluff, but fluff that makes you want to cry, because it's not REALLY fluff... am I rambling?
I loathe and despise stories that end with 'it was just a dream' but you pulled it off really, really well. A lot of fluff, but fluff that makes you want to cry, because it's not REALLY fluff... am I rambling?
AWWWWWW
Harry seems like he is 5.
I enjoyed reading this. As soon as I started, I thought this was an AU fic or something, I was really confused, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And it made sense at the end. It was really painful when Sirius wakes up in Azkaban, and wishes his godson "Happy birthday" into the darkness. Those lines were powerfully written, well done :) It was funny that Harry says Uncle Remus but calls Sirius by his name, though. And Harry seemed a bit childish squealing and all, but maybe he would have been like that had he been brought up with love and affection. Anyways, it was an enjoyable read.
Interesting subject; I liked how everything was all happy dappy (is that a word?) in Sirius's dream. He has no idea what Harry's like, but still he dreams...
wow dat was such a gd story it was realli sad but i loved it all da same gr8 story i am goin 2 go look n c if u ave written neting else now :)
New chapter soon??? please...
it's really gr8 knowing that sirius would have live happily instead of just dreaming in azkaban prison. i luv all ur stories!!! keep it up!
not nearly as good as your previos two stories which i am captivated by, but it was good, i will give it a 8 because i know it isn't your best, but great work anyways.
Woah. I love how it shows that if Harry had indeed been brought up in the wizarding world, how different he would be. I think it's great. . .and sad. Poor Sirius.
Hey, you're doing a great job with all your stories, i'll rate you a ten because it was a good story and Sirius if my favorite charactor, i'm off to reading the Sixth Year now.
it is really good I was kind of cunfuzzled at first but it was good.
u made me laugh and cry! truly amazing! u hav a special talent dont waste it!
Great! I love it. I just have a question- how did Sirius know about the wand and Hedwig? any way awsome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fantastic story! I absolutely love Sirius and this story was written very skillfully.
Truly amazing. Discription and characterization are wonderful; Harry seems so much happier a hyper eleven year old than the one he is in the books, and Sirius was great, perfectly Ic. I can't help but wonder HOW he knew about Hedwig and the wand, though. Just a fluke? Other than that, it was AMAZING! Cheers!
Amazing.. made me cry. I liked it very much even though it was so sad! Great job!