Reviewer: anduril
Date: 05/02/07 18:03
Chapter: Prologue

you might want to consider dividing this up into paragraphs instead of writing it in one huge lump. It would make reading it easier as I was cross eyed after reading the first chapter. Good reading, though..

Reviewer: grave_granger
Date: 04/30/07 15:43
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

loved the whole story. great ending!!

Reviewer: francine_dremn
Date: 04/28/07 9:41
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

very good. but i think your pacing is a bit fast. but don't you think it's a bit of cliche to use the 'sleeping-beauty ending'?. it's just my point of view. no offense intended.=D

Reviewer: francine_dremn
Date: 04/27/07 4:50
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

my eye hurt with this chapter..you should have broken it up..you know ENTER..

Reviewer: VintageQueen0789
Date: 04/23/07 11:58
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

awesome! i love this story!..brilliant! oh and im from the states, New hampshire to be exact....not that you care, but yeah...!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 03/16/07 14:44
Chapter: Prologue

Sorry but i think paragraphs would have helped

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 03/05/07 17:53
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

Great story! very entertaining! Keep up this amazing writing! Great plot scheme! Love this story!
-chrissy

Reviewer: krazymonkey
Date: 02/24/07 1:19
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

ya, its good grl !!! but, it think u should break up the whole thing into paragrapahs, just so its easier 2 read...but u know, just saying

Reviewer: gane
Date: 02/03/07 14:34
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

ha ha ha.... quite predictable!

Reviewer: gane
Date: 02/03/07 14:30
Chapter: Prologue

sounds good till here...

Reviewer: Gypsy Eyes
Date: 12/31/06 21:44
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

You have a captivating righting style. It shows excellent sophistication and this story most certainly is original.

Reviewer: Gypsy Eyes
Date: 12/31/06 21:36
Chapter: Prologue

They story may be complete, but I'm going to review anyway. Wonderful beginning. It's a thick, eye-straining pharagraph. You should cut up into smaller pharagraphs.

Reviewer: xGarggleSparkles
Date: 12/24/06 20:14
Chapter: Prologue

Ever heard of paragraphs. This was so hard to read!

Reviewer: ShaunaMo
Date: 11/16/06 12:17
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

I would love to read this but the format drives me crazy. I wish it was not writen as 1 huge paragraph

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 16:21
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

aww how cute!! its like sleeping beauty!!!!! well i have to say great story above all!!! and keep up the great work!!!=D

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 16:13
Chapter: Party Time

o my gosh

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 16:09
Chapter: Damn Potter

thats sad!! but that was nice what draco did for her!!!

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 16:04
Chapter: Hissing

dang tre harsh

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 16:02
Chapter: Letters From Old Friends

wow

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/15/06 15:54
Chapter: Tales of the Darkness

scary!!!

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